Forbidden Love, Chapter 3~!

[bou_chanxox]

Title: Forbidden Love
Author: Bou_chanxox
Pairings: AoixUruha, ReitaxRuki, Kaix?, UruhaxRuki, etc.
Rating: Changes every chapter.
Genres: A/U, Smut, Humour, Crack, Angst,Fluff.
Warning/s: nothing yet<3
Summary: The Last year of Highschool,long relationships, and then you got the new hot students, which goes to the same college after they graduate.

Comments

[bou_chanxox]

Oo, reading at school~?!O_O
My class start about an hour ....-laughs-

Haha =D!
Reita and his little problem is <3!

-smiles- Part 4 will be up soon -nodnod- am writing it all out now -giggles-

[bou_chanxox]

I see =D.
Hope you did well enough -laughs and pets you-
Well, my class wasn't fun, seriously, I had one of the most retarded lessons today, and I managed to hurt my hand. am glad it aint my writing hand though -laughs-

Oo, I'm going to read it -nodnod-

[djmeowmix]

Why do you use commas so much? All your sentences seem to be a paragraph long and run on for miles.

[bou_chanxox]

Am used to do them alot -laughs-
Though, am changing it now though, the commas and stuff -smiles-.

[djmeowmix]

ohh that's good, it's good to notice things like that and change them. it helps you grow as a writer!!

[bou_chanxox]

Especialy the smallest like details, it's the best to mention those.
So I now know where to look good on! -smirks-
Problem though, Part 2 will have a delay, It doesn't show up now in my e-mail o_O;;..
since I wrote alot during classes last week and the past few days...xD