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[bou_sempai]

iunno sawwie dis is mai first entry.. so dont mind me if i are suckish..
Title: [Untitled?]
Author: ♥ Chiisu♥  [bou_sempai]
Pairing: UruhaxRuki
Chapter: Oneshot
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Smut..
Warnings: my horrible first fanfic..Uruha in bondage?
Sypnosis: errrr theres a new service in tokyo that lets people rent out eh slaves.. and uruha's curiuos...^^;;

Comments

[black_fenrir]

oh wow~ XD HOT! kawaii uru!! miniskirt???!! hahahahah XD

[bou_sempai]

-turns red at the thought- x3

[black_fenrir]

i looove it~ more!! XD XD *blush*

[hara_emi]

Haha, i think the slave idea is funny. the imagery of Ruki in the box is hilarious XD

[bou_sempai]

xD i was laughing at that part too x3

[bou_sempai]

waahhh!! Sank you!!! lol dats what i was thinkin while writing this x3

[ahmtal]

it's funny because you panicked so much it seeped through the words, and as uru was supposed to panic, lol, it worked!

ok, pink skirt?! where did that come from? i'm curious.

There, lying on the bottom, with a ball gag, handcuffs, and leather belts restraining his every move, was a fuming, pissed guy. He had the whitest skin Uruha had ever seen and blonde spiky hair. Uruha, with trembling hands undid the gag and was met with a "What the fuck do you want".
priceless.

at least you wrote about the lube and the prep, even if it was kinda rushed. but the condom? knowing that ruki is being delivered all around town?

that idea was brilliant, really. and your uruha fitted beautifully. thanks for sharing ^^

[bou_sempai]

lol yah i panick alot T-T and the pink skirt.. hmm.. iunno when i think of what uru would wear...i think of pink and really short skirts xD it just kinda made since to me dat he would just HAPPEN to have a skirt laying around...x3 and lol yes i was rushing kinda.. and like..the lube...lols yes..

[ahmtal]

it's true the thought of uruha in a pink minishirt is quite appealing...
*drools*

anyway, there is nothing to stress about: it's clear that you can write. so just keep it up, ne?

[bou_sempai]

lol sank you but i have just one question. looking at other's journals, there fics arent like um how do you say it..its like you click it and it takes you to another page or something like that.. is there a way to make it like that? cos im so confused.. >.

[bou_sempai]

lol sank you for the advice! ^-^ and thanks for reading :]