Comments | bouncing_leek: [Fanfic] The Necessity of a Palm Tree

bouncing_leek

[Fanfic] The Necessity of a Palm Tree

Aug 25, 2011 20:55

Author: bouncing_leek
Title: The Necessity of a Palm Tree
Fandom: Doctor Who
Word Count: 1586
Characters: Ten, The Master (Simm)
Pairings: None (Well, if you squint, some Ten/Master, but it's more friendship than anything else)
Summary: The Doctor and the Master are standing on a beach, silently fighting over captivity and openly arguing over the ( Read more... )

fandom:doctor who, creative:fanfiction

Comments 2

gentlehobbit August 25 2011, 22:29:22 UTC

I like the mood in this fic very much. The Master is stubborn and recalcitrant, and the Doctor is earnest, pleading, and equally as stubborn. I can see their long... if not friendship, definitely relationship through your words ( ... )

beachy_geek August 27 2011, 01:09:50 UTC

This was lovely, and very touching. I thought it was very much in keeping with their characters and their history. I'm amazed that you could write so well in a language not your own--your platypus must be very happy!
The grammatical changes have already been mentioned previously. I hope you post more of your stories. You might want to have a Beta to read them before you post and help with your English. Thanks for sharing this with us!