Is the title "Brief Vignettes" redundant?

[bouncyweee]

A cool wind chills my hands as I crawl out of my car, looking towards the brick walkway that leads to my mothers home. I open a creaky door (that may not shut properly, after which my father will go grab a cleaver from the kitchen [because my great-grandmother hides the hammer in her bedroom] and use the blunt side to re) to a gaudy artists

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[polyethylenept2]

I like the description of your parents (especially your father's ears) the most!