The clock is striking ... (?)

Aug 09, 2004 20:32

Cold solid rain drops fall on her body and slowly slide down. The clouds move faster and the sky turns black in a matter of a few seconds. The city evacuates immediately. She is the only one who dares to stand there. Her legs become too feeble to carry her body so they weaken under the load ( Read more... )

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the_gris_effect August 9 2004, 20:40:22 UTC
Beautiful....extraordinary!

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middling August 9 2004, 22:26:26 UTC
After this state I was in, I am finally back to being who I really am.

Good to hear. Your presence has been missed.

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_____etc August 9 2004, 23:19:11 UTC
the first one isn't allowing me to do anything else but stare it, for quite some time now. makes me want to run my fingers up and down your backbone. make me feel cold and lonely, too.

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glasdraad August 9 2004, 23:22:53 UTC
why is it described as a replactment of ideas? it's a curious turn of phrase.

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telephonic August 10 2004, 00:07:41 UTC
geez, just passing by and i would have to say that these are more than wonderful, seriously.

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bourjois August 10 2004, 01:16:02 UTC
Thank you.
The way you write, I am speechless.

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telephonic August 10 2004, 10:40:53 UTC
i'm flattered by your words.
i'm going to add you.

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