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Finishing The Roll - BF

Aug 03, 2008 02:04

title: Finishing The Roll
pairing: Sing/Eiji
warnings: some angst, spoilers, some swearing, unbeta-ed
rating: NC-17 for sexual situations
notes: to dracadancer, although it took a while. happy move-in. i tried to make this happy (i'll give you a hint - it's subtle)
setting: after the manga

Finishing The Roll

"I think you should do it," I tell him as I set ( Read more... )

banana fish, sing, eiji

Comments 4

marmalade_girl August 3 2008, 14:55:35 UTC

This is lovely. And though the end was abrupt, it was actually very fittingly so. Sex ends like that, yes? Particularly if it might've been a mistake and part of you is regretting it right away. I think you captured that awkwardness very well in your sudden end.

And damn, you're good at yaoi. ^__^ I loved this. I loved your spare description of Eiji's bedroom, I loved the fact that photos of sex with Sing are juxtaposed with the last photo's of Ash (that's gonna sting when Eiji develops them, you know). I love that you made them 69 - you don't see that too often in fanfic, for some reason.

Yeah, this was a perfect one-shot. Thanks!

boxofhatebrains August 3 2008, 21:27:50 UTC

i'm so glad that you touched on the things i really wanted to highlight but was afraid i might have "told, not shown".

i'm glad i didnt get yelled at for the abrupt ending (although i havent read draca's reply yet ^^;;). you're so sweet with your comments and i'm really happy that you liked it.

:D and thanks for talking about the 69! yes, it's so rare to see it in fandom and i'm not sure why. it's still very intimate and probably happens a lot more often than sex.

thanks again!

dracadancer August 3 2008, 20:09:22 UTC

When I read the title of this one I thought it was going to be about sushi at first. lol Honestly though this one-shot is amazing. It has just the right amount of angst mixed with hope and longing in it, not too graphic on the sex but just enough to satisfy. Eiji was spot on and can I just say again how much I love Sing? I <3 Sing. ^_^ Seriously this is probably one of the best you've written.

boxofhatebrains August 3 2008, 21:32:25 UTC

lol sushi :D

thank you! that's such a big compliment coming from you. it's that good? XD awesome! i'm glad i didnt disappoint. the whole way i was like, "is stacey going to like this? what about this?" and in the end, they just kind of carried themselves.

i <3 sing, too :)