heir - GW

Aug 03, 2008 03:10

Heir
characters: duo, quatre - mentions of quatre/trowa
rating: g
warnings: unbeta-ed, angst
setting: after the wars
notes: this is a little fic that feels unfinished, but i don't think will go any where else. just the pilots in real situations - kind of feel.

Heir

"So, what's up?" I ask when he doesn't say anything, just fidgets with his napkin. He's not ( Read more... )

quatre, after war, duo, gundam wing

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dracadancer August 3 2008, 20:13:18 UTC
I like how it was Quatre for once who didn't want the kid instead of Trowa. Quatre's always the one everyone writes as LOVING kids. But dang, what a place to leave off! Open-ended much?

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boxofhatebrains August 3 2008, 21:33:49 UTC
i know, i know. i liked the idea, too, but trailed off because i didn't know where else to go ^^;; heh heh. i could see how he'd like kids...as long as they aren't his own. he's a very busy guy...

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salamandere August 7 2008, 04:30:27 UTC
ooh that was great! the dialogue was right on, i thought! and i was really intrigued by quatre not wanting kids and trying to figure out why. duo is such a good friend :)
and YAY! you know i looove when you post :D :D

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boxofhatebrains August 7 2008, 18:57:14 UTC
:) and i love when you comment and let me know how i'm doing.

yeah, i was getting fed up with "kids make everything better" fics. people are very complex and some don't want children (a lot of my friends), so i thought it'd be interesting to try, but unfortunately, i didnt get too far. :P

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salamandere August 10 2008, 01:43:57 UTC
:DD

i definitely agree with you that kids don't automatically make things better - in fact, I think they mostly complicate situations and I liked that Quatre knew enough about himself (he ought to, after all!:D) to be serious about not wanting any AND to know that he wants time with Trowa because goodness! That's not going to happen with kids around!
it's okay if the story doesn't go farther! it was a lovely slice of quatre's life and his friendship with Duo and it was very satisfying :DDDDD

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