National Anthem [Kai-centric]

May 20, 2012 16:03

National Anthem
Kai-centric, implied Luhan/Kai and Chanyeol/Kai
G, 463 words
Amazing how charming he can be when he puts the effort in.

a/n: Idk, I wasn't at Disney with exo because I live all the way on the other side of the country but in a lot of the pictures I saw, Jongin looked kind of bored/tired/lonely. so I wrote this~ kind of angsty but also ( Read more... )

pairing: luhan/kai, pairing: chanyeol/kai, rating: g, fandom: exo, author: emberberry, #fanfiction

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citypolaroids May 20 2012, 20:21:15 UTC
this was really ~mellow~ haha, idk how to really describe it. it reminds me of those childhood movies where jongin is the little lonely child left out from all the summer fun of his friends. it also reminds me of a nice and cool glass of lemonade on a hot summer day. lol i guess what i'm trying to say is i like this and write moar :3

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emberberry May 21 2012, 14:22:01 UTC
aw thank you~ lol yeah that's what it seemed like to me from a lot of pictures I saw of him. he was just kind of there for a while. but thankfully happy Jongin pictures surfaced :D thanks for reading & yes haha I'm writing more ;)

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tiggie0307 May 23 2012, 16:02:22 UTC
I was worried he was sick, but then again he may just have been tired from the time zone change. I liked this, it puts all the feelings on a level field; if that makes any sense.

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emberberry May 24 2012, 13:24:12 UTC
yeah, I was thinking the same thing, that it was either he was sick or jet lagged :c thank you for reading!

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jadedsunset May 23 2012, 17:17:43 UTC
I love your wording and how you described what Jongin was feeling with such depth ♥

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emberberry May 24 2012, 13:25:01 UTC
thank you ♥♥

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yumi_maki May 24 2012, 01:09:30 UTC
I really liked this. It was very atmospheric and a little melancholy and I think you did a good job of putting his feelings and thoughts in perspective while still expressing how confused things seemed to him.

(I also read earlier that Kai was sick that day so that might explain the pictures. But idk how reliable that is since I just saw it on Tumblr.)

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emberberry May 24 2012, 13:26:21 UTC
thank you! ♥ I'm glad you enjoyed it. also, I read something like that too but yeah it was on tumblr so I wasn't sure if it was true. seemed like he might've been sick, though :(

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13fireflies May 24 2012, 05:15:53 UTC
I'm not even joking, Kai, but I have a calculus test tomorrow.
THIS IS SO WEIRD AND PSYCHIC ALSJDJDJSKD!!! It's as if your posting times determine my studying times or vice versa. OTL
But this fic ahhhh Kai writing about Kai. :3
Honestly he looked really tired at disney and I was almost a bit worried because he usually isn't like that. Well at least in Korea, he's not like that. Maybe he's still "running on Korean time" I love that phrase. :D
Ninja!hunhan I see youuuu~ <3

lol okay back to studying!! Well, more like sleeping actually...

♥♥♥

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emberberry May 24 2012, 13:30:54 UTC
akjdfhgaalkdf I swear I'm not doing this on purpose, Jess omg

lol one Kai writing about another ;D I love him too much, lots of my friends tell me I act like his mother ;; always fussing over him so of course I would write fic about him looking tired and lonely at disney. we're so used to seeing him all smiley and stuff or smirking or whatever in Korea…

haha, of course I would ninja!hunhan into something ;) ♥

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13fireflies May 25 2012, 03:22:35 UTC
lol it's alright!!! i am just so amused by it every single time.

awww, but that's so sweet though!!! Next time exo goes to disney you should go along and be like those coordi noonas who take care of all the members. :3

ninja pairings are the best, honestly, they're such a tease. ;D

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emberberry May 25 2012, 07:04:49 UTC
I'm glad you're amused! it makes me feel not as bad since you are amused by it lol.

I know coordi noona is like such a desired job in fandom because of reasons but I'd just love to be a coordi noona and I think I'd be really good at it because I am damn good at taking care of people lol. or I could be a coordi unnie do they even have those?? and I would do my best to make sure they always look great because we know how that can go horribly wrong sometimes :\

ninja stuff is really so much fun ;)

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