Writer's Commentary: Stigma

[boyue]

:sits down with apple juice:

Ahem, I'd like to begin by reading a passage from... Yeah right. Let's get down to business! I've decided to give a little commentary on the characters and whatever else I feel needed to be said.

Temari: I never thought I would make Temari out to be the antagonist, but it felt right. I like the sibling rivalry that goes

Comments

[rockleerox93]

oh my, I'm glad the story came out differently than you had planned it to be because you would have made us so very sad =[ (although tears were shed, the ending reassured readers that Gaara could finally live in peace with Lee and his daughter.) Well, I still love your story Stigma and I do too, hope it gets discovered once again. =]

[batty_angel]

It was really a wonderful ending that left me in tears. Poor Matsuri, although I do admit that I was one of those people who where happy about her death - I think it's more to do with the idea of her being the obsticle between Gaara and Lee. So rather than logically blame Temari who threatend Gaara into that situation, Matsuri got the blame instead... but that's just what I think ^^'

Anyways, I really liked the ending. I especially liked how you portrayed Gaara's daughter - I actually had a 'squee' moment when reading her part XD and it was even better with the hug and kiss ending X3 (I'm a sucker for happy endings, I blame Disney for the influence XD) Also I thought you did a good job voicing Gaara, he can be a difficult character to write for *nods*

But.. I shall end this loooong comment with virtual gold stars! WELL DONE! :D