Nice. Unfortunately from the line 'orphaned' onwards I'm gonna have to mess with, in order to make it fit the storyline. By the way, Hitler was assassinated in 1933. Get your fictional history right.
Anyhow, the powers are still fine and the name is good, as are his outfit and equipment. But most of the bio is still up in the air (at least for you, I have it all hammered down). Control of your own history is one of the prices you have to pay for having amazing powers.
And don't worry. You can even keep the different colored eyes. There's even a way to fit THAT in...
Think you might get a kick out of this. ^^; I was messing around with Jack's eyes last night, making all sorts of odd/creepy combinations of colors and pupil types, and then this happened:
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Anyhow, the powers are still fine and the name is good, as are his outfit and equipment. But most of the bio is still up in the air (at least for you, I have it all hammered down). Control of your own history is one of the prices you have to pay for having amazing powers.
And don't worry. You can even keep the different colored eyes. There's even a way to fit THAT in...
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