Oooh! The flashback was really powerful and it was nice seeing somebody actually to actually stick up for somebody who is being bullied. It was a nice touch!~
The action in the post was also really well written! Poor Takashi T_T. Aaaand the bit with giving CPR and him not believing he was actually dead was really good too. It all seemed very plausable and in character for Kaidan :'D
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The action in the post was also really well written! Poor Takashi T_T. Aaaand the bit with giving CPR and him not believing he was actually dead was really good too. It all seemed very plausable and in character for Kaidan :'D
So good job on this post, Dan ^^
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