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carlisle516 August 3 2010, 11:51:47 UTC
Oooh! The flashback was really powerful and it was nice seeing somebody actually to actually stick up for somebody who is being bullied. It was a nice touch!~

The action in the post was also really well written! Poor Takashi T_T. Aaaand the bit with giving CPR and him not believing he was actually dead was really good too. It all seemed very plausable and in character for Kaidan :'D

So good job on this post, Dan ^^

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versipellis August 3 2010, 11:57:36 UTC
Kaidan's kind of awesome. I don't think I mentioned that before, but he is.

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sashwizzled August 3 2010, 17:03:02 UTC
Really enjoyed this NPC death. Really well done. o/

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