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Chie Eda - D3-E4 - Island

Aug 05, 2010 20:06

“Oh, and Chie?” Etsurou said, smiling as he slipping the pistol into his bag. “Have fun! You look so fucking cranky. It's just a game ( Read more... )

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pumpkinart August 6 2010, 15:03:57 UTC

Awww, CHIE >:C

Awesome post, behbeh. ♥ /BORING AND UNORIGINAL COMMENT

sjorn August 9 2010, 19:56:25 UTC

Ohh, I liked this a lot, Laurra. It really seems like a turning point for Chie. Can't wait to see how she gets on now. >:3

rietje_1 August 9 2010, 20:10:02 UTC

I agree that it seems like you're slowly but steadily making Chie mentally become a bit stronger, I don't think she would've ran from a friend at the beginning of the game, whether he killed someone or not. The more focus on her gun for protection also seems new, but considering she's been threatened twice now, it makes sense.

In short: I see the beginning of a bit of a journey/transformation here and it's interesting!

koyasaurus September 7 2010, 02:11:24 UTC

Again, as I mentioned in one of your other posts, I love the touches you use with Chie's synesthesia to describe the voices of her classmates. :) It's a great touch!

I'm glad Chie's becoming a bit more ~independent~. She was a little bit Norikoesque D: BUT YOU'RE A GREAT WRITER so I knew she'd develop after two or three posts. I think she could be a great contender. :3 Keep it up Laurra. MORE SYNESTHESIANESS.