Zuki Abe [D6-C7] - The only difference between downtown and uptown is therapy and Valium

Aug 29, 2010 16:51

 Zuki finally managed to build enough courage to leave the police station. Her house wasn’t too far away. Maybe she would be able to find something there, anything. She quickly ran in the direction of her house. She just wanted to go to her room, and act like none of this was happening.

She finally reached her house to find the front door already ( Read more... )

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etsurou_ikeda August 29 2010, 22:00:28 UTC
Laurrrrra. I'm so glad you're sticking with Zuki.

That rape scene was horrifically graphic, and I'm glad you went into the gory details instead of, I don't know, trying to make it more subtle or something. This will help to explain Mizuki's promiscuity and her anti-social lifestyle. I'd love to see family life following the rape as well and how she deals with having to live with Katsu.

It was short, but still awesome. :3 Keep at it!

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sjorn September 9 2010, 01:55:26 UTC
I totally agree about the rape scene, Laura. It was gross and horrible but that what rape is, and it's nice you didn't sugarcoat it or ~fade to black~ or anything. :) I'm liking Zuki so far!

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