JOHN BARROWMAN / SCOTT GILL RPS FIC - DAMN HIS EYES - Part 12

[brachypelma99]

JOHN BARROWMAN / SCOTT GILL  RPS FIC - DAMN HIS EYES - Part 12

Title: Damn His Eyes

Characters : John Barrowman and Scott Gill. Dan and Paul + others - fictional friends

Rating : PG

Disclaimer : I don't know or own JB or SG. All this is my imagination.

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Terry smiled.

“Now you begin to do as you are told

Comments

[cmkildare]

OHHHH!! Thank you for this!! I have awaited it with baited breath!!!
There were some sections of the 'other' language Scott spoke to the stallholder that were whited out, was that intentional?
Otherwise gorgeous!! Can't wait for more!!

[brachypelma99]

Dammit! I've tried editing it but it won't show.
It's a Turkish translation of what Scott says in italics. Not really vital to the story, but I thought it looked good.
I might take out the Turkish language and invent one of my own :)

[cmkildare]

Oohhh that would be so cool! Let me know if you want help, making up fictional languages is a kind of hobby of mine. Love this sotry so much! Glad to see you back on LJ always miss you when you're away! *HUGS*

[brachypelma99]

Sorted! Had to make up a language. At least there's no big 'white out' now :)

[bbmcowgirl]

I've been hoping for an update and you didn't disappoint. Fantastic.

[anonymous]

Yes!!! I was so waiting for an uupdate on this story,I'm glad you fund time to go on with it.
Poor Scott : please let him be safe and well with his man soon

[artistwife]

Yikes! Great update it looks like it will take a miracle to get Scott safely out of this.