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Fic: Collared I: Wild Thing (1/1)

Jul 06, 2009 21:53

Title: Collared I: Wild Thing (1/1)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters: Bruce/Dick
Genres: Challenge, Drama, First-Time, Slavefic
Rating: NC-17
Claim: For the dcu_freeforall Challenge (Bruce/Dick)
Prompt: T 4; P 11: Scarecrow Gas
Prompt Count: (4/15)
Warnings: Explicit non-con. NOT between Bruce and Dick ( Read more... )

dcu_freeforall, batman/robin, collared, bruce wayne/dick grayson, challenge

Comments 35

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bradygirl_12 July 7 2009, 03:39:26 UTC

Whoohoo!

Ok, first I have to say I LOVELOVELOVE the imagery of Dick dancing as a slave for Bruce in the beginning of this fic. So evocative.

It seems to fit, doesn't it? ;)

Second, Bruce claiming Dick for his own? Yes, please! :)

In this 'verse, seems the Waynes have this little tradition. ;)

And Dick will be willing, because you know the needs of this boy. :)

jlvsclrk July 7 2009, 06:25:29 UTC

What a roller coaster of emotions! Bruce's dream seemed so sweet and then it all went horribly, horribly wrong. Oh Bruce, what does it all mean?

I love the idea that he wakes up with love and relief in his heart, and that Dick understands what he needs and finds it a joy to give. Beautiful, and I love the idea of Bruce finding a collar to mark his claim. First in a series: how scrumptions!

bradygirl_12 July 7 2009, 15:15:05 UTC

What a roller coaster of emotions! Bruce's dream seemed so sweet and then it all went horribly, horribly wrong. Oh Bruce, what does it all mean?

You may notice brief descriptions of some of Dick's attackers, a fear that must skirt around Bruce's mind quite a bit with all the Boy Hostage situations.

I love the idea that he wakes up with love and relief in his heart, and that Dick understands what he needs and finds it a joy to give. Beautiful, and I love the idea of Bruce finding a collar to mark his claim. First in a series: how scrumptions!

Yes, Dick is very intuitive when it comes to his Bat. :)

And the second story is being written in my head, and we'll see whether or not Dick is receptive to this little tradition of the Waynes. ;)

dinahqueen July 7 2009, 08:47:37 UTC

bradygirl_12 July 7 2009, 15:18:00 UTC

I loved this! First part was saaaad, but great. Beautiful imagery. :) If Bruce didn't love him before he probably did after that dance, before all the sadness stuff started happening.

Great job, hon! :)

Thanks, Dinah! :)

Yes, Bruce's dream started out great, but this is fear toxin, and so his fears took over.

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bradygirl_12 July 7 2009, 15:20:16 UTC

You created such stunning images, you have such a wonderful way with words.

*beams*

Thank you, Louise! :)

The boys are at their most beautiful together.

Oh, yes. :)

ctbn60 July 7 2009, 12:31:12 UTC

Lovely descriptions!! The dream was enticing and horrific for bruce and the reader. You did a great job turning the dream into the nightmare with your words. They flowed so well painting a very visual picture. The ending was perfect. Bruce laying claim to Dick. Perfect.

Loved it.

bradygirl_12 July 7 2009, 15:23:42 UTC

Lovely descriptions!! The dream was enticing and horrific for Bruce and the reader. You did a great job turning the dream into the nightmare with your words. They flowed so well painting a very visual picture. The ending was perfect. Bruce laying claim to Dick. Perfect.

Loved it.

Thank you, dear! :)

It was tough to write, I gotta tell ya. I worked over several of the scenes and really sweated it out during the rape scene. This is only the second time I've written a scene like that, so I was pretty nervous about its reception.

I'm glad the whole story worked for you, and there will be more to come when I get the chance to put it down on paper/type it up on-screen. :)