Fic: Wings Of Angels Trilogy Book I: Epidemic (12/14)

[bradygirl_12]

Title: Wings Of Angels Trilogy Book I: Epidemic (12/14)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters (this chapter): Bruce/Dick, Barbara Gordon, Ollie Queen/Dinah Lance (Ollie does not appear in this chapter)
Series Notes: When Gotham falls to an epidemic, Batman and Robin need help to protect the city. All chapters can be found here.
Categories: Drama

Comments

[mybatboys]

Very nice! Next! *grins*

[bradygirl_12]

LOL! Thanks! And next shouldn't be too long. :)

[jij]

Oh, this was beautiful, from the perfect title on down. Barbara and Dinah were wonderful here, and the details of the graveyard and its eerie beauty were spot-on.

She wondered how many times Bruce had stared at his reflection in the flawless surface.

Maybe because it's hard to draw, I rarely see the detail that most gravestones are polished to mirror-clarity in the many scenes of Bruce at his parents' grave. It's an interesting and evocative touch!

[bradygirl_12]

Thank you, Jen! :)

This scene popped into my head as very atmospheric, and I wanted to focus on the women's POV.

Thank you again! I've seen many of those stones and they are beautiful, and an image of Bruce as Batman reflected in that surface just came to me.

Love it when the Muses work well! :)

[demon_faith]

I like this friendship, and how the larger story is reflected in their interaction. Lovely.

[bradygirl_12]

Thank you, Faith! It was nice to get the women in. :)

[cavaleira]

Yay for pre-Birds of Prey :)

She felt a shiver course through her as a cloud passed over the moon. The mirrored quality of the stone reflected back the mourners. She wondered how many times Bruce had stared at his reflection in the flawless surface.

When I read this part I got shivers too. A sad but touching chapter.

[bradygirl_12]

*Love* the ladies! :)

Thank you, Cavaleira. When the mood hit, this chapter practically wrote itself.