*is at a loss for words, holding back tears* Man, that was touching... and even though I am a female soldier, it still brought back memories of my dad and the times he fought in war and otherwise, where we thought he wouldn't come home...
Well, I am happy to have touched you in a way. Please, don't cry... it's a bad poem, really... but I am glad it had the effect that I wanted it to have...
IT IS NOT A BAD POEM! why do you put yourself down like that?! I hate it i truly do! Its the one of the only things that can really get me pissed! People putting themselves down!
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It's a lame poem... it sucked...T_T but I think it displayed the point I was getting to...
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In other words, awesome job!
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And thank you...
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Alas, I do know I could do better... and I have, so please take that into consideration...
I apologize for getting you upset, however...
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