Kings and Beggars of the World - Part 3

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Title: Kings and Beggars of the World

Rating: NC-17

Author: braincloud2

Parings: Harry/Louis, Slight ot5

Warnings: Sexual content, unexplained time-travel, and some offensive language.
Disclaimer: This is fiction, and I don't mean any offense.  
Total Word Count: 15,000+

Summary: Harry’s on tour and he feels on top of the world-that is-until he wakes up

Comments

[tamzinrose]

it makes me so happy that there is more of this! =D write all of it always <3

[braincloud2]

Thank you! It makes me so happy to know you're still reading it :)

[redscarfe]

Oh man, this is so great! Everything about the boys finding each other and fitting right back into a group was pinging on all my OT5 feels, ugh. The boys messing about in the dance section, and everyone else noticing that *something* was special about this group of boys was just so much fun to read. The Harry/Louis at the end here was also so perfect, awkwardly teenaged and just the right amount of hot.

I actually found this off delicious and jumped in with no expectations, so it was a bit of a shock as I got to the end of this part to realise it's a WIP! So keen to see how the rest plays out, thanks for writing it :D

[redscarfe]

Oh, and I'm going to add you to keep track of your updates as well, if that's alright! :)

[braincloud2]

Thank you! That's more than fine with me~ and I didn't know this story was on delicious, but it makes me unreasonably happy to know that it is :)

[exposedwords]

This part really didn't disappoint. All the ot5 feelings were great, and the Harry/Louis was so good, the right kind of awkward for their situation while still being very hot (seriously how is this your first time writing something like this). And for some reason I really liked when Louis bit Harry for relief and Harry just let him. So great.

[braincloud2]

Yay thank you~ I was worried it wouldn't be as fast-paced as the other parts, so I'm glad you liked it. I was bloody nervous about writing something like this, but I'm so happy it seemed to work out :)

[thirstingdragon]

OH MY GOD, YOU WROTE MORE!!!!! **RUNS AROUND SCREAMING LIKE A MANIAC**

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Right then...

I love this! The doubting of the familiy, the slightly different spin of the interviews, all of it! Love how Louis just showed up and Harry was, "From Doncaster?" like he forget for a second. And then not only did you write a fucking cuddle pile of boys but OMG HOT BONDAGE HAIR TRIGGER AWKWARD BOYS COMING!!! *___*
I didn't think there was a way to love this more, but I was WRONG. <3333 I can't wait for more!!! (I'm crossing fingers, toes, and eyes that there will be some!)

[braincloud2]

XD Mate, you make me so happy I could just die~ thank you! Real life is going to intrude over the next week, but I promise I will write more soon. I’m so glad you like this - I think you'll love what I have planned for the boys when they finally get to the X Factor house ;)

[braincloud2]

Thank you! I'm so glad you find it realistic that's the biggest compliment for something with sci-fi tropes :D Gosh, just thank you, you're so nice!