Kings and Beggars of the World - Part 4

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Title: Kings and Beggars of the World

Rating: NC-17

Author: braincloud2

Parings: Harry/Louis, and also definitely heading in the OT5 Direction (smirk)

Warnings: Sexual content, unexplained time-travel, and some offensive language.

Disclaimer: I don’t own, and I don’t intend to offend. This is fiction.

Total Word Count: 20,000+

Summary: Harry’s on tour and

Comments

[ologist]

I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH ALL OF MY FEELINGS AAAAAHHHHH. When I saw there was an update I almost died :)

But seriously this continues to be flawless. You're dealing so well with all of the issues that would naturally arise from this displacement in time and I'm not sure how much more of this I can actually handle

[braincloud2]

Thank you! Seriously you are amazing, I don't even know what to say, except that I'm putting a new chapter up in a few minutes, and I'm sort of freaking out about it, but I hope you like it anyway <333

[exposedwords]

Oh this continues to be so great, I'm loving it. The way Harry and Louis' thing is developing is realistic and perfect, and everything else, really. Zayn gave me chest pains tbh, I can't even imagine.

[braincloud2]

Thank you! I hope you'll like the new chapter I'm putting up. I kind of feel like I'm jumping the gun a little, but everyone's been so nice that I can't not~

[redscarfe]

Ugh THIS IS SO GREAT. I'm a little bit incoherent, especially this late at night, so I'm going to second everything ologist said above!

But in particular- everything about Zayn and his grandfather was perfect, and I think I said it in a different comment but the boys being total goofs as a group (OT5 feelings!) is my favourite thing. And just personally, I love the little hint of the outsiders' perspective of them, here with the girls watching and laughing. Don't know why, but I just like watching others realise this lot of boys is special. :D (Also, them dancing to Sexy And I Know It is a *great* visual, thanks for that.)

[braincloud2]

haha thank you~ I'm kind of incoherent just from your comment! I hope you'll like the new chapter I'm putting up, it's kind of a happier one <3

[its_a_deal]

i'm really, really loving this so much!! can't wait for the next part!!

[braincloud2]

Thank you :) I really glad you like it so much <3

[elenji]

this is really good, the group is spot on and it's realistic. I like that you want to write this as a long fic because i don't want to stop reading!Do you think there will be some ziam because they kiss during the x factor?
Oh i loved the group interview at boot cam, it was hilarious "mozzarella cheese"!

[braincloud2]

Haha, thank you~ and I just read that wonderful fic by Luxover, 'The Difference Between Knowing and Knowing' and I fell in love with Ziam, so yes, there will be some in later parts :)