(OHSHC - KxT) Payment in Full

[brainfuneral]

Title: Payment in Full
Author: brainfuneral
Fandom: Ouran High School Host Club
Pairing: Kyouya/Tamaki
Rating: R
Summary: Tamaki's gaffe becomes Kyouya's gain.
Warning: Not safe for work!
Notes: Written for sharpeslass, who requested something with a hot and bothered Kyouya. Of course, this was ages ago, as I am a very very very slow writer. Hopefully it'll come

Comments

[sharpeslass]

Oh, thank you sooooo much!!! I'd actually forgotten that you even said you were going to do this, so it was a lovely surprise - especially as I've been in a rather Kyouya mood lately for some reason. The discribed mishap was very cute and in character and the smut was exceedingly hot. I really loved your Kyouya, though you did a nice job with the hysterics of "the king" as well. This was a wonderful thing to come home to after a long day of flying to Reno for a business meeting of Long and Dull. Thank you, again, so much for being sweet, and wonderful, and talented. You know how hard it is to find good Host Club smut, so this is doubly appreciated (you really should write more!!)

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[clytemnaestra]

Yay!

I'm glad you liked ^_^ And, uh ... the fact that it was so late was entirely calculated to make it seem like a surprise! That's it! ... (FAIL)

:D

Maybe I'll unveil my kink meme fic(s), that seems to be a pretty popular trend nowadays...

[sharpeslass]

I didn't like - I LOVED!! Definitely unveil, but wait til after the 7th nights have had a chance to settle in or they may not get the attentions they deserve!!
♥

[sharpeslass]

and if you were really bored, you could write about Tamaki's next payment. It is a large debt after all...

[jedishampoo]

Hee, just as enjoyable the second time around. I love your Kyouya, and his perfect blend of snark, self-interest and actual attraction to, and affection for, my sweet little Tamaki.

And a cute, believable premise, too!

(You should post to an ouran comm!)

[clytemnaestra]

Yay! Thank you again for reading it over and correcting my FAIL at the English language! :)

I love how Kyouya really isn't as heartless as he thinks he is, and I hope that came across at least a little. He wuvs Tamaki, he totally does.

And I think I may post to an Ouran comm! I haven't surfed for Ouran stuff in ... AGES!

[velvetina_wonka]

Ahh, how very cute!! I love your Tamaki - you have his eccentric nature down perfectly and Kyouya was a wonderful mixture of sarcasm, wit and want for the King. **Drools**

I sure hope that Tamaki has fun paying of his rather huge debt - and why wouldn't it surprise me to learn that at the end of it all Kyouya had convinced strawberry pants to deal with his father's business again. **grins**

Thank you for a fun read!

[brainfuneral]

Thanks for reading!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Both of these characters are just so much fun to play around with!

And yes, I'm sure somehow Kyouya will convince the poor kid that the underpants incident was somehow his own fault and in no way connected to the Host Club. *evil grin*

[caeseria]

sharpeslass just rec'd this and I had to pop by and say this was a wonderful read! You have the characters down so well and I could hear them talking in my head. In fact, you had me grinning like an idiot from the first sentence because I could totally see Tamaki in my head, in his sulk corner!

I'm still actually in shock over finding a good Ouran fic. Don't take that the wrong way, please! (It's just they are few and far between and it's quite shocking to find one!)

[brainfuneral]

Hehe, yay! I'm glad that you liked it and it was terribly nice of sharpeslass to rec it ^_^

Tamaki is just too fun to write, I think. And yeah, good Ouran fic is somewhat hard to find. jedishampoo wrote a Kyouya/Haruhi piece that was good and quite different from your usual fluffy Ouran fic, imo. My OTP will always be Kyouya/Tamaki, though! :)