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Oct 07, 2009 11:06

sleep open swim,
verbose mutes
ensconce antigravity
to resonant memory.

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crackerman October 9 2009, 02:22:21 UTC
I don't think this makes sense. I think it's just a bunch of words.

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potncello October 11 2009, 15:42:59 UTC
you're right it's just a bunch of words. i guess this is more fit for a poetry community. i'll delete it soon as someone else posts something or if the moderator says sooner.

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crackerman October 11 2009, 18:04:58 UTC
I think poetry is fine for the community but I personally have a beef with a lot of poems that don't seem to make sense. Maybe it's just my lack of poetic sensibilities.

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potncello October 12 2009, 01:16:41 UTC
oh... um, words are verbose mutes for one thing.

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