Ficlet: Just Try to Resist Logan/Veronica PG-13

[brandee_06]

Fic Title: Just Try to Resist PG-13 Logan/Veronica
Author: Brandee
Pairing/Character:Logan/Veronica slight Duncan/Veronica
Word Count:2,444
Rating:PG-13
Summary: Follow up to (Compare and Contrast) and (Sitting In A Tree) so reading those two might help! Pre-series fic

Comments

[poniesforall]

Hee hee! Happy V and Logan make me smile. I'm sure I'll go looking for angst again soon, but for right now this series is the ticket! You make me smile.

[brandee_06]

I love happy LoVe so I'm glad you enjoyed this! Glad it made you smile yay!! I think sometimes a little fluff is good for the heart.. Even though this piece has a different tone than the first too.. Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed!!!

[jenwin23]

So the story continues, I like it. Very interesting. Can't wait to read more.

One quick edit:
Lilly, we're not together anymore."
"You're point?"

should say "Your point?"

[brandee_06]

Aww thanks! Eek looks like we missed that error huh lol... Thanks so much for point it out!! My eyes failed me last night I guess!

[arabian]

One other little typo --

"I'm sure he wouldn't thank you for making out with his best friend behind his back," Veronica spoke shaking her head.

-- I'm thinking that's supposed to be "girlfriend."

Like everyone else, I'm really enjoying this. I love, love pre-series fic so much. There really should be a pre-series community for all the characters. I think it would be awesome! Anyhoo, thanks for this and I can't wait until the next one.

[brandee_06]

Thanks for pointing out that typo! Heh, I guess it does read better the right way huh?

Preseries is the BEST!! I love writing it and reading it! There's just something about it...

I'm glad you enjoyed this, thanks so much for reading!!

[daria_103]

I'm so glad you wrote more of this. This piece was just as great as the first two. Normally I don't like the idea of L/V going behind Lilly and Duncan's backs (well it can be forgiven in V's case since she's dating the Dullnut lol) but the fact that it's not a full on affair just some kisses and feelings that they don't quite understand makes it acceptable, if that makes sense.

I also love the little touches you put in, like Logan noticing that Duncan isn't that affectionate with V and thinking she deserves better. Just this one little line and it can totally change my view of characters and perception of the situation. That one little line had me thinking 'yeah he's totally not good enough, she should be with Logan' and I love that you can do that in one line, most of the time it takes a big dramatic moment.

I can't wait for the final piece of the series, hopefully she pics Logan.

[brandee_06]

I actually understand where you're coming from with the whole 'cheating' thing.. I usually don't like it either.. I think that's why I've been very careful with my boundries.. I really want to show the confusion of both of them, because there's no way either of them would be okay with it.

I'm glad you like that line.. While I think Duncan did care about Veronica there was always a missing 'something' there...

Hmm I have the final piece written in my head, now I just have to put it to paper!! Thanks so much for the feedback, glad you liked it!

[adja999]

Yeah ! I read your three stories. They're great.
Sequel ?
Anyway, I'll wait for your next post.

[brandee_06]

Aww glad you liked all three.. There is one last piece to this little series, hopefully it'll be out soon! Thanks so much for commenting!!

[ashleynichole14]

Yay!! im so excite you wrote more to this fic. i loved it!! *squeel* Please i need more!! LOL!

[brandee_06]

It took me long enough huh? lol.... Yeah, half of this has been sitting in my documents since April... So I figured it was way past time to finish it!! Glad you liked it!! More to come I promise.. Oh and I LOVE your icon, it's so adorable!

[ashleynichole14]

Lol!! Yay!! i cant wait for more!!! Thanks i like yours too.