Comments | brandee_06: Fic: Almost Like A Country Song 3/? PG-13

brandee_06

Fic: Almost Like A Country Song 3/? PG-13

Sep 24, 2007 21:19

Fic Title: Almost Like A Country Song 3/?
Author: Brandee
Pairings: Veronica/Troy, Logan/Veronica, Logan/Parker, Wallace/OCC
Word Count:7,442
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: S3, know that Parker and Logan dated kinda goes AU after that..
Summary: She once cared about the boy she thought he was, but now can she fall for the man he really is?
Disclaimer ( Read more... )

wallace, troy/veronica, almost like a country song, logan/veronica

Comments 14

cartoondoggy September 26 2007, 17:51:12 UTC

You've definitely got Veronica down to tee. I'm glad you don't let her forgive Troy very easily. He really did a terrible thing. I felt bad for her being in such an uncomfortable position. (Personally, I wouldn't give him a second chance either). It's nice to see Wallace around too and happy with a new girl. Also, the part with Logan and the teddy bear was very sweet. Awww.

brandee_06 September 27 2007, 02:19:08 UTC

Aww thank you! I'm glad you felt I did okay with Veronica.. Troy did do a bad thing, and I totally understand why Veronica is having issues with him still!

I love Wallace and Veronica, so it's so much fun to write a fic, where there friendship is front and center!!

Glad you liked the bear scene, I couldn't resist it! Thanks SO much for reading and leaving a comment!!!

motylik September 26 2007, 18:57:29 UTC

This was awesome. You really got the characters down. I really like the chapter. I wouldn't forgive Troy either, because there's no way V can know he really has changed. The part with the stuffed animals was painful. ;) I hope you continue soon!

brandee_06 September 27 2007, 02:22:27 UTC

Aww thank you so much!! I'm glad you think I have the characters down, that means SOO much!! Troy would be hard to forgive, and ITA, he'll have to prove himself to Veronica. That won't be easy at all ha.. Yeah part with the stuffed animals was a bit uncomfortable huh? V and her ex's what can ya do ha.. Thanks So much for reading and leaving the comment!!

kobewife1 September 27 2007, 04:16:01 UTC

I glad you've updated. That was a great chapter including the bear scene with Logan. Can't wait for the next chapter:-)

brandee_06 September 29 2007, 03:36:15 UTC

Aww thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the bear scene... I felt it was a must... Working on the next chapter now! Thanks for replying.

simply_vm September 27 2007, 09:04:24 UTC

this is awesome! troy. love it.

It would be good to see troy and veronica together. to see what logan would do! great work!

brandee_06 September 29 2007, 03:39:48 UTC

Awww thanks!! I love Troy so writing him is fun! Of course Logan will ALWAYS have my heart!! Thanks sooo much for reading and replying!

poniesforall September 27 2007, 14:33:31 UTC

That's right, Mac. Go ahead and poke the big bad bear. Hey while you're at it, why don't you just steal her taser too ( ... )

brandee_06 September 29 2007, 03:49:40 UTC

Wow, long feedback.. I love you! Heh...

That's right, Mac. Go ahead and poke the big bad bear. Hey while you're at it, why don't you just steal her taser too?

Ha, Mac is being VERY bad isn't she? Poor Veronica, she can't even pout without being hassled.

I can just see her doing the head-tilt thing.

I totally saw the head tilt in my head when writing that scene! V's head tilt is awesome!

Good idea the carnival. Such bittersweet memories for all. And introducing "normal" into the mix? That's just brilliant. But in the VM world, "normal" = boring. (Except I really like Bronson!)

Couldn't resist the carnival.. The only thing I hated was that I couldn't slip Weevil in there somehow..*sigh* maybe next chapter... I like Bronson too! More than Parker and Piz actually, but yeah, Normal in Neptune is soo boring heh..

Ahhhh. Irony a close cousin to sarcasm. You write both very well. It is so very Logan to point out their past and try to hold it over V. Such sweet memories.Aww thank so much!! I'm glad you think I do both well.. I do ( ... )