OH WOW!!! definetly well worth the wait...The one time he called her Tink i was all squeee cos i love that nick name for her...plz write somemore soon!!
If you ever make me wait this long again i will strike you down!!
Awww, I'm so glad you enjoyed! And I love that you like the nickname! Sorry this one took so long... Here's hoping you won't be striking me down anytime soon heh..
Woooooooo ^.^
anonymous
January 28 2008, 08:37:56 UTC
First to post!! :D Awesome Chapter!!!!! I love how Logan made things better like he always goes. Although I was suprised that Veronica's reaction wasn't that bad to her being a Kane. I guess it will be a lot worse when she has proof. I'm so happy this chapter is finally posted. Hope the next chapter is posted soon! Dying to know what will happen next!! :D
Re: Woooooooo ^.^brandee_06January 29 2008, 02:14:22 UTC
Awww thanks! I'm really glad you liked it! I hate that it took so long! I was really kinda going for Veronica being a bit in shock with the whole Kane thing... With so much happening so fast, I think she's numbing herself to everything, if that makes sense..
Ooh Yayy!! Glad you enjoyed! I'm glad you enjoyed the DUncan/Veronica part. I reallly wanted that one to work out.. And I'm glad you felt Duncan's pain.. He really isn't a bad guy...
Logan and Casey as friends is always fun.. And Casey Gant is no one's yes-man! Well maybe Veronica's.....
Glad you enjoyed the chapter and thank you so much for reading and commenting!
YAY!!! *jumps up and down* New chapter...which was totally awesome! This was seriously sooo good. I thought the scene where Duncan told Veronica was really well written! He's totally the kind of guy that would babble for ages before getting to the point. And Casey siding with Veronica, or at least telling Logan to cut her some slack was great...especially when Logan was frustrated and thought about how it was cause Casey once liked Veronica. And of course Logan being the voice of reason for Veronica makes me happy...and the end of the chapter WOAH! Can't wait for more!
I can't believe you left it there! So, touching... Poor Ronnie! I really hope she is a MARS! It can't be any other way. This was so worth the wait. I just really hope it doesn't take as long for the next update. AWESOME JOB! It seriously brought tears to my eyes! :OD
Aww, sorry about the cliffhanger.... I'm so glad you enjoyed!! So sorry it took so long.. I'll def. be working to make sure it doesn't take that long to update again!!! Thanks so much for the comment and for reading!
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If you ever make me wait this long again i will strike you down!!
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Ashley <3
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Thanks so much for reading!!!! And commenting!
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I loved the strained suspense between Duncan and Veronica. I could feel Duncan's anguish at not wanting to hurt Veronica.
I loved the interaction with Logan and Casey, how Logan was irked that Casey wasn't playing Logan's yes-man.
Weevil as Veronica's support and the scene at Logan's... Once again, you've done it. Really good job.
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Logan and Casey as friends is always fun.. And Casey Gant is no one's yes-man! Well maybe Veronica's.....
Glad you enjoyed the chapter and thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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I'm really glad you enjoyed the DUncan/Veronica scene.. I have to admit, I got SO into that scene as I was writing it!
Casey is def. his own man, so he's going to be honest with Logan.. Glad you enjoyed that part!
Thank you so much for reading and for the comment!!!!
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