Ficlet: Parking Lot Promises Logan/Veronica PG

May 25, 2008 11:58

Title: Parking Lot Promises
Pairings/Characters: Logan/Veronica
Author:Brandee
Word Count: 1,280
Disclaimer: Rob Thomas owns all that is Veronica Mars. I own nadda, zilch, nothing…
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Takes place the same night of the series finale.
Summary:Oneshot. Staring over at him with a confused look, she realizes that Neptune High has ( Read more... )

veronica/logan, parking lot promises, pg, fic

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bklyangel May 25 2008, 17:36:16 UTC
Dude, you already posted it!

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brandee_06 May 25 2008, 17:52:22 UTC
That's my feedback? Hmmph! lol j/k. I think I like the new last line better? And your icon still makes me giggle!!!

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bklyangel May 25 2008, 18:04:46 UTC
LOL, you made the icon!!!
I like this last line better than the orginal.
And if you want my feedback, check your email around the time you sent me this the first time ::grin::

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brandee_06 May 25 2008, 18:22:48 UTC
lol I know I made it! I still love it though! I took a sick pleasure in making it! And your feedback is noted! I was glad you liked this since I've been all odd pairings lately!

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vmarssaaddict May 25 2008, 18:10:25 UTC
I loved it! You always manage to write Logan so brilliantly! The LoVe interaction was awesome. Great job, maybe a follow up is on the way? (My version of saying 'pretty please') :)

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brandee_06 May 25 2008, 18:34:34 UTC
Aww thanks! I'm glad think my Logan works. He's such a complicated boy lol! I wouldn't rule out a follow up to this.. I do love the idea of exploring it more, so I've give ya a, positive maybe?? Thanks so much for reading and the comment!!

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rowanceleste May 25 2008, 21:27:49 UTC
I do love it, because you could tell from the finale they were going to be okay and it was far from over, but this was a great step in the road! And isn't this perfectly them? So in tune, with so many emotion-filled awkward silences because there's so much between them that they aren't saying, but is just there? I picture their summer to have awkward text messages or phone calls out of the blue, where one or the other can't help themselves, because they don't want to lose touch and they know they're important to each other, but they're still feeling their way because neither one wants to be emotionally devastated again, etc..

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brandee_06 May 26 2008, 03:29:45 UTC
Aw thank you! Yeah I do think the finale gave alot of hope. I am just selfish and wanted more ha! Those two were just so perfectly complicated! I see their summer just as you do!! When I was writing this I knew that it wouldn't go far into a romantic nature because there was no way they were there yet. But after the final 'look' on the show, I knew they could at least mend a few fences. Anyway I'm rambling, but thank you soo much for the awesome response! I'm glad you enjoyed this!

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jesterlady May 25 2008, 23:52:38 UTC
Aww, they're going to be fixed! Yay!

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brandee_06 May 26 2008, 03:31:15 UTC
Heh, yep! Those two silly kids just belong together! Thanks for reading and commenting!!

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unightfog May 26 2008, 10:34:43 UTC
I am always looking for good post series finale LoVe fics! :-)

really enjoyed reading your ficlet...I wish the series would have had an ending like that.

excellent job! thank you!

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brandee_06 May 28 2008, 18:31:16 UTC
Aww thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I just couldn't get the idea of Logan and V back at the high school for a final scene out of my head. THanks so much for reading!!

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