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branwen_blaidd

Fic- Sibling Rivalry

Sep 30, 2011 19:34

Title: Sibling Rivalry
Pairing: Jack/Ianto, Owen
Ratings: Adult -spanking
Spoilers: General Series 1 and 2
Summary: Owen and Ianto cross the line in their bickering. Jack takes action.
Disclaimers: I own nothing!
Notes: Thanks to oncomingsconefor encouragement and feedback. Comments please!

( Fic- Sibling Rivalry )

spanking, fanfic, fluff

Comments 11

oncomingscone September 30 2011, 18:59:22 UTC

Super Cute. Great story. About time Owen got punished!

Great work, Cariad. xx

badly_knitted October 1 2011, 15:49:57 UTC

Nice to see you're still around. I miss your writing!

branwen_blaidd October 1 2011, 20:47:20 UTC

She's even posted something! http://oncomingscone.livejournal.com/27448.html

badly_knitted October 1 2011, 23:15:00 UTC

Oh, wonderful, thanks for the link! That's going on my list of fics to read tomorrow as it's gone midnight!

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badly_knitted October 1 2011, 15:49:04 UTC

Nice to see Owen getting some richly deserved punishment! Maybe that'll improve his attitude. It's just a shame he dragged Ianto down with him. Ianto was trying so hard not to lose his temper, but Owen was determined to make him. I think Owen should have got a few extra smacks for that!

ficwriterjet October 1 2011, 19:51:09 UTC

Such a wonderful story! I felt slightly bad for Ianto since Owen said some pretty mean things to provoke him, but felt a little better about it when Jack made Owen admit he was being a bully. I liked how quickly Jack put Owen's protest to rest with this line: "I’m permitted to execute you if necessary so I don’t think punishing you like a kid will raise many questions." LOL. Can't argue with that. I loved that while Ianto could handle a lot more pain in other circumstances, he found himself crying even though he didn't want to because this was punishment that he knew he deserved. I loved Owen's thoughts and guilt while hearing Ianto getting spanked. I found his obsinance and hesitation before the spanking to be perfecly in character. Aww, I loved Ianto going in for a hug as soon as it was over, and Owen feeling slightly jealous. And I think the fact that Owen cleaned up his mess as soon as he got out of Jack's office, made up for some of his earlier comments to Ianto. I loved that they both apologized to each other too. It was a very ( ... )

roguemarch October 2 2011, 22:54:56 UTC

cute and hot, can't tell if I feel fuzzy or aroused! Great fic as always!

cookielaura October 3 2011, 03:04:01 UTC

Awww this was adorable! Awesome to see a Jack/Owen story in this vein, there's nowhere near enough, and Owen definitely needs this sort of treatment!

Loved Jack stroking Ianto's hip before he went into the office, loved Owen being jealous of the hug, and that ending is sooo cute! I want to hug all three of them now!

Thanks for writing bb! x