fanfic part two, intro of hyoyeon and hyosun pairing

[brassbikini]

So, tonight during my mega-long shift at work, I decided to sit down and jot down another bit for my fanfiction. For anyone who read the first bit, this one obviously follows that chronologically, but I'm not sure if there won't be something in between in the finished product. I don't know if I want to have a sort of transition scene (which is what

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[sundaypearl]

I really like Yuri's inner dialogue though at first I was a tad confused. I also love that it's Narsha and Shinyoung as the Madames. It made me giggle. Also, when you said, "taking care to full pull it closed behind her." it should probably be fully closed. All in all, very very good.

[sundaypearl]

please keep going with this fic. I'll always be your biggest fan! <3