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brassebouillon

A BRAND NEW LIFE (Chapter 5)

Jan 06, 2007 13:16

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a brand new life

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knightdawn January 7 2007, 09:18:13 UTC

that was soo sad...ryans drawings were very enlightening and vunerable...

brassebouillon January 7 2007, 12:45:19 UTC

Thank you for your comment! I don't want to spoil this fanfic, but at the end (not yet!!), Ryan's gonna be better (and the fanfic less sad!)

anonymous January 8 2007, 00:47:01 UTC

Good story so far.Update soon.I usually don't like to read Cohens adopting Little!Ryan stories,but this one is really good.I'm desperately in the mood for post "The My Two Dads" fics where Ryan continues to call Sandy by Dad and starts calling Kirsten by Mom.

brassebouillon January 8 2007, 16:54:03 UTC

Thanks! The My Two Dads was an awesome episode. The season 4 rocks (and Stupid Fox cancels the show... :(
Some rumors said the OC's moving on the CW, but that doesn't sound very likely to me

dogsbody01 January 9 2007, 00:56:28 UTC

This story had me wanting to cry,all of those injuries Dr.Green unearthed and the fact he's got a condition, which can be a precursor to Diabetes in some instances.Just tragic stuff.But for them to discover, what an incredibly bright little boy Ryan is; just made me smile.However I hope, that Ryan can survive a bully like Luke Ward, and Harbor's gang of future water-polo goons.

brassebouillon January 9 2007, 11:56:48 UTC

Thanks for your comment! Little Luke Ward? The same buly that Big Luke in the first episodes of season 1 + upset because of the birth of his twin brothers.
Diabete?! No, he "just" didn't eat (I hope that the little times I pass out in my life were just because I didn't have time to eat, not because I'm suffering for diabete. Getting scared!!) because he isn't used to the Cohen's usual food and it's hard for him to have left his family.
I hope you'll like the next chapters!
:)

dogsbody01 January 16 2007, 21:18:47 UTC

I look forward to the next chapters.As for the hypoglecmia, it can be in some cases; a prediabetic disorder.

60schic January 16 2007, 23:20:57 UTC

Three weeks after he came into their lives, Ryan still barely spoke, but she could see that he was feeling more comfortable… or perhaps less uncomfortable was a more accurate way of putting it. - - So very much like grown-up Ryan! You are doing a marvelous job with this story. You are making us care about poor, silent, mistreated little Ryan. I can't wait until he meets 5 year old Luke---according to young Seth, he was an asshole then too!

brassebouillon January 16 2007, 23:31:01 UTC

Thanks for your comment! I hope you'll like the next chapter when little Ryan meets little Luke-already an ass!
By the way...cough*fresher air*cough ?....(really like it!! As Anne35 said, I nudge a lot!!)

60schic January 16 2007, 23:50:00 UTC

Hee---I just read anne's latest update to stall going off to write more. I'm getting there, but suffering from writer's block.