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katwoman76 May 15 2007, 20:03:45 UTC
This was a great chapter.
Heart-breaking at times, cute at others.
Thank you for updating.

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brassebouillon May 16 2007, 06:58:56 UTC
Thanks for your nice comment! I hope the teeny part I add to explain that Doctor Folding was a male doctor but that it was ok for Ryan, is fine by you!

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sar_bear4ben May 16 2007, 05:00:12 UTC
awwww this was so cute....very sad though in some parts...about ryan being abused :(
please update asap

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brassebouillon May 16 2007, 07:03:55 UTC
Thanks for commenting! The fact that Ryan has been abused is what made his personality. He has also been abused in canon, but the difference is that Little!Ryan hasn't learnt to hide it. A fifteen year old Ryan will explain calmly that he used to have his butt kicked for Christmas, a five year old one will wake up having a nightmare and calling for his foster parents!
The next chapter isn't already written, so I'm afraid you'll have to wait a little...

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fifimom May 16 2007, 06:50:37 UTC
“I can trust you. You won’t ever drink too much and hurt me. You keep me safe,” he murmured.
Poor little Ryan, so much fear but he is beginning to trust his new family. Thanks for the update.
Of course on the show Kirsten did drink to much and hurt Ryan but you are writing the Kirsten we all wanted but never really got.

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brassebouillon May 16 2007, 07:08:54 UTC
Thanks for your nice comment! I'm writing 'my' ('our', I assume!!) ideal Kirsten, the one I wanted to have : a Kirsten (and a Sandy) who realize that even if they take care of him, they can't help Ryan without being helped by a doctor, who say actual words to reassure their new charge and to explain him that they have nothing to do with his 'old' family.
But I think it's easier to say actual words to a five year old. Dealing with a 'damaged' teenager should be really tough.

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taylortyme May 16 2007, 08:07:34 UTC
aww, that was so heartbreaking and yet so satisfying to see things work out. i love the whole chiclet line. amazing story, please update soon

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brassebouillon May 16 2007, 08:29:26 UTC
Thanks for your nice comment! Things are beginning to work out for Ryan and his new family. There's still going to be some angst in the next chapters, but always to prove to Ryan that his new family cares and is abble to protect him!
From time to time, I try to include some 'reference' to canon! A wifebeater, chiclets and *major spoiler* (no, I'm kidding!), a bunny called Fl...(to be continued...)

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primdevi May 16 2007, 14:14:00 UTC
really cute- loved the invention of chrismukkah

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brassebouillon May 16 2007, 16:52:05 UTC
Thanks for commenting! I really wanted to explain how Seth made up Chrismukkah!

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