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brassebouillon

A BRAND NEW LIFE (CHAPTER 12)

Jul 08, 2007 19:15

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malinr July 8 2007, 18:13:10 UTC

Poor,poor baby Ryan! Not only did you make him remember his dead bunny, you also gave him the mumps! I know somebody declared " hurt Ryan summer",but...... I love this story and I was thinking about it earlier today. I thought I had friended you a long time ago but I did today. I hope you don't mind ? Hugs

brassebouillon July 8 2007, 20:31:05 UTC

Thanks for your nice comment! I've just befriended you too!
I've given him the mumps because it's important for the next chapter. I need a character to show up for a reason and here's the reason. I won't spoil the next chapter more!
"Hurt Ryan's summer"! There are quite great stories that have been written in June, so yeah!

katwoman76 July 8 2007, 18:16:51 UTC

Great update.

brassebouillon July 8 2007, 20:32:35 UTC

Thanks! As usual, Anne35 helped a lot!

philippa_ July 8 2007, 19:00:22 UTC

I love this story so much and am always so excited to see that little Ryan picture in oc_fiction. I love Ryan's innocense and how he always just can't trust the Cohens. It gives trued meaning to "one step forward and two steps back"

It was so sad to read about the bunny and being left under the pool table while his mum left to be with random men. I also can not believe you gave him mumps. Poor Ryan!

Is it bad that I was kind of cheering for Caleb for getting someone to beat up Dawn's boy friend?

Thanks so much for the update :)

brassebouillon July 8 2007, 20:22:48 UTC

Thanks for your nice comment!
There was a wonderful fanfic on FF.net actually called "one step forward" and the sequel "Two steps back"!
I've given the mumps to Ryan not because I'm totally mean, but because of the story I'm going to develop in the next chapters. But he's going to be just fine, don't worry.
I hope that Beaten Up!Dawn's boyfriend! is kind of great to read because it was cathartic to write!

philippa_ July 9 2007, 08:54:02 UTC

Your welcome.
Hmm I'll go and check that story out. It sounds good. I like finding new stories to read.
Well I really hope you post a new chapter soon. This story is so good, you can read it over and over again and not get bored by it. I am also now very intrigued to know where you are going with this plus I'm looking forward to the hurt/comfort.

brassebouillon July 9 2007, 09:56:54 UTC

the author of the fanfic is "Reading" I think. If I'm wrong, go to Reading's profile and read her fanfic because they're really great. Anne35's stories are really touching (the amzing Twist of fate and "The Same", "the meeting" or "exact words" are fantastic. Brandywine421 is a really prolific author. HelenC, Chapzer, Chasei, 60schic, Erynnbeth, Muchtvs...there are a lot of fantastic writer on LJ!
I'll try to update asap!

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loracj July 8 2007, 20:47:29 UTC

Poor woobie - just when he was starting to feel a little more comfortable.
Nice touch with Cal doing what he does best.

brassebouillon July 9 2007, 07:19:59 UTC

Thanns for the update! Yep, that's our Caleb...but this time, he includes Ryan in his family, so can we totally blame him for doing something illegal?

loracj July 9 2007, 09:07:00 UTC

Nope, not when he was acting on behalf of Ryan.

anonymous July 8 2007, 22:53:52 UTC

Good chapter.Update soon.Good news:In the commentary for the series finale, Josh confirmed that Kirsten's mother's name was Rose.We were right!

brassebouillon July 9 2007, 07:29:11 UTC

Thanks for commenting! The 'Rose' in Sophie Rose had to be after Kirsten's mom!