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smc36 December 7 2007, 17:52:23 UTC
Awww. That left such a lump in my throat.
Poor Little Ryan.
Love Caleb.

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brassebouillon December 8 2007, 17:20:37 UTC
Thanks for your comment! I've always considered Caleb stubborn/mean and stupid in canon when he decided that Ryan's bad influence for everyone in Newport. So I've decided 'my' Caleb would be nice and protective with all his family, including Ryan!

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brassebouillon December 8 2007, 17:21:12 UTC
Thanks for commenting!
I've always considered Caleb stubborn/mean and stupid in canon when he decided that Ryan's bad influence for everyone in Newport. So I've decided 'my' Caleb would be nice and protective with all his family, including Ryan!

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katwoman76 December 7 2007, 20:02:15 UTC
Aw, this was great.
First the Kirsten-Ryan time at night and you continue it with Sandy being the protective dad. I guess, THAT is a totally new concept for Ryan.
And Caleb helps as well? Awesome.

Looks like you are on a roll right now. I love it.

Hm, and if anne35 finds time in her busy life again to beta your stories, maybe there is hope, that we will also see an update from her stories soon again. *hope*

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brassebouillon December 8 2007, 17:23:14 UTC
Thanks for your comment!
I really wanted to show how protective 'My' Cohens/Nichol are!
Everytime I write to Anne35, I beg her to post a Twist of Fate update...I love this fanfic so much!!

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anne35 December 8 2007, 22:28:36 UTC
The plan is to finish the chapter up this weekend and have to loracj by Monday morning. Of course that was the plan last weekend too. (hangs head in shame/> What's really sad is that there is probably only a page or two left to write in this chapter. I just can't make myself stay awake past 11:00. How pathetic is that?!? Getting older sucks!!

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katwoman76 December 8 2007, 22:35:51 UTC
I'm sure your little ones get you out of bed early in the morning and keep you busy during he day. So I get the urge to turn in 'early'.
Whenever you are ready, sweetie.
But I admit, it would be nice to read another update this year. Which would mean before Christmas, since I will be offline for the last week of December and the first one of January. But that's just me and my wishful thinking, so please don't feel pressured.

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malinr December 7 2007, 20:53:50 UTC
Your little Ryan is so hugably (not that the original is any less). I've seen your comments on other stories and been wondering if you had time to write on this story and here it is Yay. Thanks and hugs

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brassebouillon December 8 2007, 17:25:33 UTC
You're welcome! Thanks for commenting! I've just finished this fanfic and I'm going to write a sequel but the last part has still to be betaed and my wonderful beta is kind of busy with her new little girl!
Canon Ryan! IS totally hugeable...

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kazfloyd December 7 2007, 21:41:28 UTC


“I’ll always keep you safe, Ryan,” Sandy declared and placed a protective arm around the boy’s shoulders. “That’s what dads do.”

I really like the ending. Great job.

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brassebouillon December 8 2007, 17:26:32 UTC
Thanks for commenting! My beta helps a lot!

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