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brassebouillon

Wasted (Part 2)

Mar 02, 2008 06:24

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katwoman76 March 2 2008, 22:02:47 UTC

Poor Woobie. He is on a real downward-spiral.
I'm worried about him. tome for the Cohens to wake up and buy a clue.
PDP, guys!!!

Thanks for the update. Great chapter.

brassebouillon March 3 2008, 10:52:36 UTC

Thanks for your comment! The Cohen aren't going to realize there's really something wrong before several months...

indigorayne March 2 2008, 22:17:44 UTC

The Cohens are just clueless. Poor Ryan you can really feel for him in this. I look forward to the next chapter. :)

brassebouillon March 3 2008, 10:54:02 UTC

Thanks for your comment! I'll post an update next week!

fredsmith518 March 2 2008, 22:23:15 UTC

very painful portayal of low self image
hopefully Kirsten will continue to worry? and she and Sandy will catch a clue?

brassebouillon March 3 2008, 10:54:47 UTC

Thanks for commenting! They'll catch a clue but not yet!!

marsalka March 3 2008, 03:44:15 UTC

wow, really good chapter, very believable. Hopefully, everyone will buy a clue soon and Ryan will get some much needed quality attention (also, I really want Oliver to implode)

brassebouillon March 3 2008, 10:56:48 UTC

Thanks for commenting! Something is going to happen and Ryan is going to have the attention he needs, but not yet!
And I promise Oliver will implode...or something close!

mirella67 March 3 2008, 03:59:57 UTC

Good story. You're doing a great job of showing how this boy could try so hard to control his life that he's totally losing control of it.

brassebouillon March 3 2008, 10:57:38 UTC

Thanks for your comment! I really try to write this story the most realistically I can and I'm glad you think it's ok!