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brat42

Part IX of A Little Jealousy

Dec 18, 2011 13:33

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musicbitch December 18 2011, 20:17:53 UTC

And more visions, I worry for David if Regina finds out that he's starting to remember. I'm glad to see that Graham was mentioned, I seriously cringed when it was revealed the two of them were sleeping together on the show. And I get pissed off every time I think of that last episode, but I'm sure your fiction will make up for that;)

lady_disdain January 31 2012, 12:51:16 UTC

I seriously need more of this fic! Love where it's headed and you're doing such a great job.

chibi_ai May 22 2012, 02:12:34 UTC

This is golden! I love this series that you're creating so much! <3 I have a soft spot for jealous/possessive male characters of their "true love" so this kinda went straight to my little fangirl heart from the beginning. The one thing that I really like about this is how you're taking your time setting up the story and yet it never feels like it's slow; it never drags. It also matches the show's tone in story telling so there's a sense of authenticity to it that is rare in fanfiction. Well done! I can't wait to read the rest!

in_excelsis_dea October 12 2012, 19:31:28 UTC

Aww, that's it? I'd love to read more. I really like your version of these characters. I like how David is on the edge of remembering and how Regina of course tries to meddle and how he isn't too fond of Katherine, but can't really remember why exactly. And I love how he and Mary Margaret still are slowly coming together. Lovely job.