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Twilight Fic: Home (A Change of Heart, Part 9) - COMPLETE

Jan 18, 2011 14:49

Title: Home (Part 9 of A Change of Heart) - COMPLETE
Author: bratanimus
Rating: PG-13 for this chapter, R for some others
Spoilers: This story, begun post-Eclipse, is my version of Breaking Dawn. First person Edward POV.
Warnings: Mild sexual innuendo
Pairings: Edward/Bella, all other canon pairings
Word Count: 3,965
Summary: Jacob had backtracked down ( Read more... )

edward/bella, twilight, change of heart, fic

Comments 22

kudosirony January 24 2011, 04:43:05 UTC

I loved being on this journey with you. Great ending to a great story. Definitely better than BD. I like how you handled her "power" and bloodlust.

bratanimus January 24 2011, 15:13:09 UTC

Thanks so much, hon. I appreciate your thoughtful feedback and your kind words. :) Glad you liked my idea about her "power."

shadow1905 February 3 2011, 22:53:31 UTC

I'm way late in replying but this is such an amazing chapter and a wonderful end to a wonderful fanfic! You write Edward so perfectly, especially how he feels during Bella's confrontation with Jacob. And I love at the end how they promise to be a team and stop rushing off.

bratanimus February 5 2011, 01:53:36 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm so pleased you liked the story, particularly Edward's response to Bella's ending with Jacob. (Although I must admit part of me thinks Jake will someday come visit Bella when she's at school in Alaska, and then imprint on one of the female Denari clan vampires there, lol.)

I'm glad you liked Bella and Edward promising to be a team. That was one thing I was hoping would happen in Breaking Dawn, because it seemed so often that they kept making decisions without each other's input. It seems that for them to have a healthy marriage they would need to change.

Thanks again! :D