Game of Thrones/ASOIAF Fic: Undressed

Mar 13, 2013 10:03

Author: bratanimus
Title: Undressed
Fandom: Game of Thrones/A Song of Ice and Fire
Pairing: Jaime/Brienne (implied Podrick/Sansa)
Prompt(s): In hiding, mirrors
Word Count: 3,526
Rating & Warnings: M for sexual content
Summary: Brienne, Jaime, and Podrick are escorting Sansa to Lady Stoneheart and Winterfell. When Jaime and Brienne enjoy their first night of ( Read more... )

jaime/brienne, undressed, asoiaf, outtake, sansa stark, podrick/sansa, jaime lannister, podrick payne, game of thrones, fic, romance, brienne of tarth

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gilpin25 March 13 2013, 19:58:03 UTC
OOH!!!!! Out tonight, darn it, but am anticipating (racy) breakfast read.:D

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goldstraw March 13 2013, 20:51:13 UTC
seriously seriously hot! just perfectly written, completely in character. just so glad that there is more to come because this was AWESOME.

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bratanimus March 13 2013, 20:57:02 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm so pleased you liked it! I'm fairly close to finishing; I've written the first three chapters (from the POVs of Pod, Brienne, and Sansa) and have just started the final chapter (Jaime). Once it's all finished and tweaked, I'll start posting it!

Thank you again for taking the time to read this. Your kind comments mean a lot! :)

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bratanimus March 13 2013, 20:58:27 UTC
Nice to see you, however briefly! Have a great time tonight, and I'll look forward to (hopefully) squeeing with you tomorrow morning! *hugs*

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erolyn2 March 13 2013, 21:43:09 UTC
Awesome! I'm really looking forward to the WIP (especially Pod's POV) :)

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bratanimus March 13 2013, 21:50:14 UTC
Thank you! The Pod chapter is the first one, and a lot happens in it. Hopefully I'll do him justice. Thank you for reading, and for your kind words! :)

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just_a_dram March 14 2013, 02:14:38 UTC
And this isn't brief at all! Looks like a very promising start to a WIP.

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bratanimus March 14 2013, 13:18:46 UTC
OMG I love your icon. *snort* :D

Thank you, hon. I'm actually nearly finished writing it. Four loooong POV chapters (Pod, Brienne, Sansa, Jaime). Hopefully I can start posting it soon-ish.

Thanks for reading!

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kylathelurker March 14 2013, 11:42:57 UTC
WOWOWOWOW!! m(_ _)m I really loved how you handled this 'first time' it was so beautiful and tender not to mention entirely smokin' hawt! *fans self* damn that was amazing! Thank you so much for sharing!!!

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bratanimus March 14 2013, 13:22:16 UTC
Ooo, I love your icon. That's gorgeous. :)

Thank you SO much for your thoughtful comments! I'm really pleased you thought the scene was tender AND hot. I kind of doubt GRRM is going to give us this sort of payoff with J/B, so I've got to write as much as I can, lol.

Thank you again!

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kylathelurker March 14 2013, 14:25:14 UTC
Aww I wish I could claim it as my own but sadly it was alfiri she did an amazing job didn't she?

*GGG* Amen for that there can never be enough Jaime/Brienne tales out there! Am looking forward to reading more of your works in the future! =D

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bratanimus March 14 2013, 16:16:03 UTC
Amen for that there can never be enough Jaime/Brienne tales out there!

I TOTALLY AGREE. :D

Am looking forward to reading more of your works in the future! =D

Thank you again! I hope to post the rest of this story soon-ish. It's part of a longer piece in four long chapters, each with a different POV (Pod, Brienne, Sansa, and Jaime - I'm working on the Jaime one now).

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gilpin25 March 14 2013, 15:20:15 UTC
Breakfast took a little while this morning... ;)

Hotter than HOT, especially with the need for silence, but most of all I love what's going on between these two - your Brienne is heartbreaking in so many ways. Now I'm desperate to know what's gone on before this to get them to this stage, and what will happen afterwards, and of course Sansa's with them and so frankly this preview is wonderful, tantalising and cruel, in equal measure. LOL!

Love this exchange:

“Not at all. Flattery is what one resorts to when the truth is not an option.”

“Your moral code is interesting, Ser Jaime.” But she kept on grinning like a fool.

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bratanimus March 14 2013, 16:25:54 UTC
Thank you!! I'm so glad your breakfast was made a tad more interesting by this story. Who knew you enjoyed hot sauce on your omelet, lol? ;)

So, I'm almost finished with this four-part story. I've written the chapters of Pod, Brienne, and Sansa, and am now working on Jaime's. Hopefully I can complete it soon. It's funny, because so much is just implied about what's going on with J/B in the Pod chapter, though he doesn't witness what they really get up to at night when he's asleep. I've had lots of fun "seeing" each of these characters through the lenses of the others.

Thank you for pointing out my favorite Jaime line. :) And thank you again for taking the time to read this. Your feedback, as always, makes ME grin like a fool. :D

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