Comments | brate7: Fic: Priorities

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Fic: Priorities

Feb 04, 2011 09:39

Title: Priorities
Author: brate7
Fandom: Sherlock BBC
Rating: PG
Word Count: 725
Summary: The chase isn't always merry.
Note: Originally posted at thegameison_sh for the prompt "new."

( The only thing he could focus on was not letting Sherlock get so far ahead that he lost track of him. )

sherlock, fic

Comments 20

mrwubbles February 5 2011, 05:11:51 UTC

Oh I liked this. John's POV was great here. The closing line was perfect, too. It would just be Sherlock to having memorized John's scars too!

brate7 February 6 2011, 18:52:34 UTC

Thank you, sweetie! I seem to be having an easier time thinking in John's voice. Perhaps because I am not a sociopathis genius? But I liked the idea of Sherlock maybe feeling guilty and showing that he cares in an odd way. It suits him.

So... you gonna post yours?

mrwubbles February 7 2011, 01:48:25 UTC

So... you gonna post yours?

Er, um, weeeell. I got a bunch done. Waiting til I have a dozen. Yeah, that's it. :)

day221b February 5 2011, 21:56:41 UTC

Oh, very nice!

brate7 February 6 2011, 18:53:00 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked.

penfold_x February 6 2011, 02:22:43 UTC

Such a great concept, and you execute it wonderfully! I'm so glad you signed up for The Game Is On!

brate7 February 6 2011, 18:58:49 UTC

I appreciate your kind words, as well as your help with the fic in question. I'm glad I signed up, too. And you know I'll be calling on you again. Bwaa ha ha!

penfold_x February 6 2011, 19:14:52 UTC

Bwaa ha ha!

Oh, the torture. *eyeroll*

starrylizard February 6 2011, 04:10:36 UTC

Lovely! :)

brate7 February 6 2011, 18:59:14 UTC

Thank you!

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brate7 April 2 2011, 02:57:43 UTC

Well, I'm glad you decided to comment now. I'm so glad you liked it. I had a lot of fun with chasing boys. I'll have to return to them at some point.