Ore-sama Olympics - Round One Submission

[extra_echizen]

Just a little something I threw together for this Olympic Challenge. I wrote this whilst packing for my trip, so if there are any mistakes, you'll know that's why ;)

Title: If I had one wish…
Author: Echizen Ryoga
Rating: Hmmm, PG-13 at a push
Characters: Atobe/Ryoma
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Word Count: 1472
Summary: Ryoma and Atobe go sailing,

Comments

[princeofwriting]

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I...

That...

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[princeofwriting]

Okay.

It was good until the part where I said that you were better than me because I don't think that you are. Not really. Not anymore.

And... I seriously doubt Atobe loves me at all. So the last line is OOC.

...I still liked it though. Thank you...

[extra_echizen]

Heh, I'm glad you liked it, it was for you after all ;) It's all a matter of personal preference Chibisuke, you may be marginally better than me at tennis, but that doesn't mean I don't still beat you at life

And I don't know about that, he's probably just playing hard to get. Who wouldn't love you? Even if you are a pouty brat ;)

[princeofwriting]

Yeah... thanks. You don't win at life.

I doubt that. He's spent too much time hating me to love me out of nowhere. ... shut up. :">

[extra_echizen]

Hey, there's nothing wrong with things that appear from nowhere. I do it myself frequently ;)

[bigi_my_yoina]

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:)

(OOC: I MISS YOU ALREADY ;O;)

[nekonyahoi]

HAHAHAH THis was great!! And kinda funny! XD Ochibi was a little OOC, because I dont' think he wants to be like anyone at all!!! :D But you write well and it made me laugh!! :D:D:D

[extra_echizen]

Thank you Kikumaru-kun, I aim to please. And lets be realistic here, who wouldn't want to be like me? ;) Chibisuke only pretends to think I'm a loser cos he's jeaous really :D

[anonymous]

yay i like it to cool nice sweet poor ryoma.............*sniffle*