Entry for Atobe's Olympics, Round One

[totallynot_kira]

Title: Between the Lines
Fandom: Inuyasha
Genre: Speculative Post-Series
Rating: G
Character: Kagome
Summary: Kagome wonders how many wings were shredded and regrown. She doesn't belong here.
Word Count: 606
Theme: If I Had One Wish...
Notes: Miroku-san, Sango-san, Inuyasha-san, Kikyou-san... I would like to stress that this is entirely

Comments

[gekokujyoutotop]

I enjoyed this very much, Light. I don't know the fandom you are writing about, but I do like the flow of the story. And your visuals are very nice also. I especially liked this:

Kagome wonders how many wings were shredded and regrown.

It signifies a sort of bleak hope, in my opinion.

[gekokujyoutotop]

I seem to forget this often. Sorry about that, Light.

[totallynot_kira]

I do the same thing every once in a while as well. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And thanks, that's one of my favorite lines as well.

[houshi_sama]

Given recent events this story was...painful to read, to say the least...but you've done a beautiful job writing it, nonetheless.

[totallynot_kira]

I agree, very painful, and something I wouldn't hope to see. And of course, thank you. I had expected you to avoid this because of the subject matter I warned about, so the fact that you still found appreciation for it is that much more poignant. Thank you.

[bigi_my_yoina]

Like you said, I am not familiar with the fandom but this was enjoyable regardless.

[totallynot_kira]

Thank you for giving it a chance, Atobe.

[nara_ku_ku_ku]

Anything pro-me gets a thumbs up.

[totallynot_kira]

Go away!