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Ore-sama Olympics Entry, Round One.

Sep 15, 2006 22:50

Title: Of Heartbeats and Flowers
Artist: Hiyoshi Wakashi (gekokujyoutotopRating: PG-13 for brief mentions of sex ( Read more... )

ore-sama olympics round #1

Comments 22

totallynot_kira September 16 2006, 04:22:12 UTC

Not a problem at all. I always enjoy beta reading for others. Anyway, it was a little flowery for my tastes in terms of style, but it's developed and you've a knack for what you've got. Good job on this piece. Great, great visuals.

gekokujyoutotop September 16 2006, 04:23:27 UTC

Thank you again, Light. Always nice to have good feedback. I enjoyed your entry also. I shall go and give you a thumbs up now.

shieldprincess September 16 2006, 04:27:43 UTC

[[ooc: Chasing Cars is totally my favorite song right now!!! ^_^ <3]]

gekokujyoutotop September 17 2006, 03:00:25 UTC

((OOC: OMGZ I KNOW. *__*))

princeofwriting September 16 2006, 05:17:52 UTC

....uh. What the...?

gekokujyoutotop September 17 2006, 03:02:01 UTC

I really do apologize. I've been in a bad mood lately and this is what I made of the song, in terms of your relationships with the two. I think you were a bit out of character, and I'm sorry for that too.

princeofwriting September 17 2006, 03:14:02 UTC

...che.

I was.

This was weird.

gekokujyoutotop September 17 2006, 03:28:04 UTC

Well, at least I apologized. Hmph. I have never really taken the time to get to know you, so I'm not sure how I could actually write you in character. Other than your usual arrogant self. So, if you have another side of yourself you'd like to show me, now is the time, Echizen. Calling you Echizen is weird, now. Seeing as there are two more on here I was unaware of until about five minutes ago. You have an older brother, as well?

Thread 13

bigi_my_yoina September 16 2006, 17:36:53 UTC

I wasn't whining.

Still not sure what to make of this.

gekokujyoutotop September 17 2006, 03:03:27 UTC

Fine. You actually were weren't whining.

To tell you the truth, I'm the author and I don't know what to make of it. It just happened.

gogglegasm_yo September 16 2006, 18:18:25 UTC

I like your writing style, yo. Excellent, although it was kind of sad.

((ooc: *g* goodness.))

gekokujyoutotop September 17 2006, 03:04:24 UTC

Thank you. I don't think we've met yet?

((OOC: OH, thank you! ^^ I've been on a writer's block for over a year now, so it's very good to be back! XD))

gogglegasm_yo September 17 2006, 04:30:58 UTC

I don't think so. I'm Reno. Nice to meet you.

((ooc: That fic was gorgeous ;P~ I'm secretly in love with the AtoRyo pairing, so I was all *__*...))