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brbsoulnomming

Parallel Part Five

May 29, 2011 01:41

( John mentally adds ‘straddling (no, not straddling, he’d been very carefully not straddling, keeping his hips as far from Sherlock’s as possible) pinning his mad flatmate to the sofa in an exhausted, frustrated, half-desperate attempt to get him to get some bloody sleep’ to his list of things to never, ever do again. )

!fandom: sherlock, fic, parallel, sherlock/john

Comments 6

tehomet May 30 2011, 22:21:29 UTC

Another fabulous chapter. I really should go to bed now, but I actually can't close my browser until I read part six.

PS tiny typo: I think it should be 'chow mein'.

brbsoulnomming May 31 2011, 00:54:02 UTC

:D I should feel bad for keeping you up, but I'm thrilled you like it enough to keep reading.

And eep, thanks for that! *edits*

angelshandprint June 1 2011, 03:55:08 UTC

Marvelous chapter. Like I said, I love Sherlock in jealousy. It makes him doubly lovely.

random_nexus June 21 2011, 17:40:50 UTC

Ooooh! Yes! I like SO much how you're letting the girls' parallels get the gents to thinking. So much!

*hugs this chapter*

Okay, time for one more... if I can stop myself at one more.
;D

guppyvisje November 24 2011, 16:01:27 UTC

Yeah! For character and relationship development~
I do love the case parts as well: it's all extremely well written, but those hints on the SherlockxJohn and FionaxSam development make me all fuzzy on the inside~

twistofapen November 26 2012, 15:21:02 UTC

I just really really need to comment on the brilliant of this chapter. The interaction between Fiona and John was great, but the scene between Fiona and Sherlock was really, really well done; I loved how they spoke of John. It was just so in-character for them.