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madlori May 29 2011, 22:33:34 UTC
Holy crap I've just lost the entire afternoon to this fantastic story. I loved it. Sam and Fiona are fantastic, I'd love to read more of them! And your John and Sherlock are delightfully in character and supah sweet.

More please!

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brbsoulnomming May 30 2011, 02:22:02 UTC
Sorry to have made you lose an afternoon! But I'm also taking that as a compliment, so gleee! Very pleased you liked my OCs, and even more pleased you thought the boys were in character!

I'm already missing this verse, so I think I may very well come back to it, even just for a quick fic or two.

Thank you so much! <3

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londonsabre May 30 2011, 00:03:36 UTC
Absolutely gorgeous!

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brbsoulnomming May 30 2011, 02:22:30 UTC
Thank you so much!! Glad you liked it. :D

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lindentreeisle May 30 2011, 04:36:52 UTC
That was brilliant! I love the way the case developed, this was a fabulous casefic to begin with. Very good, nonobvious, and the climax was handled well. (Was Matt thrown in as a red herring? I thought I caught a hint of that...) And then the way Sherlock and John sort of flailed toward each other was great. I love them being idiots about each other. :D And of course the happy ending. Tra la1

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brbsoulnomming May 30 2011, 04:58:09 UTC
Thank you! :D I'm so glad it wasn't too obvious, and that climax of the case bits worked for you! (He was, a bit! I tried to put in quite a few people associated with Sam/Fiona, so it wouldn't seem glaringly obvious who it was!) And I'm so glad you liked John and Sherlock being idiots! I had the hardest time getting them to stop it. XD

Thank you so much!

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swtalmnd May 30 2011, 06:39:22 UTC
Mmm, lovely and really just the perfect way to while away a Sunday evening. I hadn't read any of it before, so it was all a new delight to me. I really liked the intertwining of mystery and personality, the way Sam and Fiona weren't just younger, girlier copies of John and Sherlock but had their own quirks, and the delicious moments of angsty UST and misunderstanding before the romantic conclusion. All in all, a really great read!

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brbsoulnomming May 30 2011, 06:55:38 UTC
So happy you found this an enjoyable way to spend your Sunday! :D And I'm thrilled you found Sam and Fiona to be unique and not just girl copies of John and Sherlock! I tried to balance their similarities and differences, so I'm glad it worked!

Thank you so much! <3

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lillianone May 30 2011, 07:42:46 UTC
*just read it all in one go with coffee*

AND LOVED IT!

The way you write all the characters (espec. John) is just spot on and lovely.

...now I really need to go back revising for my big exam on saliva and dental tissue tommorrow *cries*

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brbsoulnomming May 30 2011, 07:49:21 UTC
Eee, thank you so much! Especially for going at this monstrous thing in one go! And I'm so very happy you liked the characters! (Especially John, since I must admit to having a giant soft spot for him. I love writing him.)

Uugh. Massive sympathy hugs for having to deal with exams. And good luck tomorrow!

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