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amytiger January 8 2011, 13:09:18 UTC
Wow, that was very evocative! Really well written. I think I managed to guess he might be in a coma with the constant repetition of "wake up". Very good. Totally mem'ing this ;)

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brbsoulnomming January 9 2011, 01:31:56 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. And yeah, I think the "wake up" bit was a bit of a hint at what was really going on.

Thanks for commenting!

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lady_t_220 January 8 2011, 13:09:31 UTC
Oh, this is beautiful. And you had be so convinced John really was dead and Sherlock was tragically, horribly losing his mind, right up until John starts telling Sherlock to fight and to come back to him and I just went "OOHHHHHHHHHHHHH...!"

Really gorgeous work, with all the heart-wrenching angst leavened by the conclusion. Which is a wonderful conbination to have.

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brbsoulnomming January 9 2011, 01:35:03 UTC
*glees* thank you so much! That is exactly the kind of reaction I was hoping for! <3

And yes, I definitely love the angst + happy ending combination. I adore writing angst, but I don't know if I could ever manage to write a completely angsty ending.

So glad you liked it!

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ex_naripolp January 8 2011, 13:37:46 UTC
... Thank you to have written this fanfiction, really. God it's brilliant, fantastic and.... Oh, I just can thank you. Thank you so much. My heart is still aching.

.... could I translate this in italian?;_; Italian fandom needs something like this. ;_; If you say not it'll be ok. I reckon so lucky to have read this one.T_T Write more, please ;_; <3 *totally in love*

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brbsoulnomming January 9 2011, 01:37:58 UTC
OMG. Yes, you absolutely can. I'd be honoured. Thank you so, so much.

I'm so glad you liked it, and thank you so much for commenting.

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bugeyedmonster January 8 2011, 13:50:26 UTC
Awwwwwwwww

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brbsoulnomming January 9 2011, 01:38:54 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! :D

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ourdramaqueen January 8 2011, 13:53:35 UTC
Oh, this is amazing! Sherlock's grief and guilt was so palpable, you had me in tears. Very well written, I loved all the layers to it, and the ambiguity that permeated it all. And the end is perfect. *sniff*

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brbsoulnomming January 9 2011, 01:40:36 UTC
:D :D thank you so much! A layered story like this was so enjoyable to write, so I'm so glad it came through.

So glad you liked it! <3

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