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Ficlet: Loneliness (Buffy/Dean)

Jul 25, 2012 20:16

Loneliness
by Bre

Rating: PG
Summary: Based on a Buffy/Dean video by Dana. A look at a relationship between Buffy and Dean - two people who have hurt each other far too much.

( I want us... )

fiction: buffy/dean

Comments 4

avamclean July 26 2012, 02:47:21 UTC

The ending is very sweet and balances the angst of the beginning. I like the use of BtVS dialogue because that scene between Buffy and Angel highlighted just how vicious Buffy could be when she wanted. Spordelia at her finest. ;)

Of course if Buffy had allowed Angel(us) to walk after killing Bobby I'd have dumped her too. Bobby owns my heart.

bre2004 July 26 2012, 12:46:20 UTC

Spordelia at her finest indeed! Buffy had a gorgeous cruelty streak in her when she wanted to use it and it was fun to play on that. And I'm glad you liked the ending! That darn Dana left me with no resolution in her video and I had to give them something!

LOL! Oh yeah, I don't blame Dean at all. It was a nice bump in their relationship.

Thank you for the amazing feedback! :D

kandykaye July 31 2012, 15:11:17 UTC

I really enjoyed this - it was developed so well and structured so well with the shifts between perspectives and times. Great job x

bre2004 July 31 2012, 16:23:21 UTC

Can I just say, real quick, that I love your icon? Because I have a Starbucks PROBLEM and I like knowing I'm not the only one. Lol.

And thank you! Such a great compliment, I'm glad it came across that way. I had to find a way to get them the happy ending so I'm pleased the way time moved came across so well. Thank you! :D