I come here like the loser that I am after reading this story at least 4 times with different gaps of time in between. I think I have a crush on you and the way you use your words
Names are much like small ripples across deep waters, he said and you must have thought, god what am I getting myself into. But before you could ask again, he cut in with a quick, name's Uruha.
Your writing is always so precious. It's very fresh to me and like not framed in canons. You write very poetic. All these are compliments of course *smiles warmly*
Like here. The way you hurry the pace of the story with Uruha cutting through, introducing himself. To me it was like watching a movie. So vivid and real.
They were all truths, but some truths are more whole than others.
The play of words, the wise voice of the author...everything is so perfect and meaningful.
Kai?
You almost choke on air. Y-Yeah?
Sit here.
Oh, God, my heart sank down.
You steal glances at him. You don't know that he's stealing glances at you too because it's a little too dark
( ... )
but why are you so lovely and nice breakjawDecember 13 2011, 05:38:10 UTC
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i don't think i can thank you more for reading this and leaving such a nice comment!!! as long as you liked what you read, i can bleed happiness out of every orifice!!!
i always feel that Uruha has a certain power over Kai despite the fact that Kai may be leader and all... tho i'm pretty certain everyone can see that already haha.
i'm glad you like the AU here, because i wasn't even sure if it would work out to drive the plot (what plot tho)... but i guess making the world a little stranger doesn't hurt! 2nd person POV seldom works because it can get annoying to read after a while, well i hope it wasn't too annoying a read...
thank you so much again (ﾉ ◍•ᴗ•◍)ﾉ ♥ you're really special too!! ♥♥♥
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Names are much like small ripples across deep waters, he said and you must have thought, god what am I getting myself into. But before you could ask again, he cut in with a quick, name's Uruha.
Your writing is always so precious. It's very fresh to me and like not framed in canons. You write very poetic. All these are compliments of course *smiles warmly*
Like here. The way you hurry the pace of the story with Uruha cutting through, introducing himself. To me it was like watching a movie. So vivid and real.
They were all truths, but some truths are more whole than others.
The play of words, the wise voice of the author...everything is so perfect and meaningful.
Kai?
You almost choke on air. Y-Yeah?
Sit here.
Oh, God, my heart sank down.
You steal glances at him. You don't know that he's stealing glances at you too because it's a little too dark ( ... )
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added to memories.
of course
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i don't think i can thank you more for reading this and leaving such a nice comment!!! as long as you liked what you read, i can bleed happiness out of every orifice!!!
i always feel that Uruha has a certain power over Kai despite the fact that Kai may be leader and all... tho i'm pretty certain everyone can see that already haha.
i'm glad you like the AU here, because i wasn't even sure if it would work out to drive the plot (what plot tho)... but i guess making the world a little stranger doesn't hurt! 2nd person POV seldom works because it can get annoying to read after a while, well i hope it wasn't too annoying a read...
thank you so much again (ﾉ ◍•ᴗ•◍)ﾉ ♥ you're really special too!! ♥♥♥
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