Ha, I ended up writing vampire fic for the challenge, too. It just sort of happens.
Very nicely atmospheric - you get a sense of being in Kai's head, because you can't tell what is "realy" happening and what is in his imagination. Very vivid and effective imagery, too!
(By the way, when I real it, the words were all appearing in a long stream in the middle of the screen - was that intentional?)
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Very nicely atmospheric - you get a sense of being in Kai's head, because you can't tell what is "realy" happening and what is in his imagination. Very vivid and effective imagery, too!
(By the way, when I real it, the words were all appearing in a long stream in the middle of the screen - was that intentional?)
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Yes it just happens doesn't it!! things don't always go the way we wanted...
On my screen it's in neat paragraphs though? o_o oh dear... looks like it needs some reformatting haha but thank you for the note!
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