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x_donttrust August 6 2010, 12:16:46 UTC
This is getting good. Doran is the cutest thing. I kinda feel my insides clenching everytime he and Demi have a moment, it's so adorable. And yay for Selena showing up!

Give us more, please! :P

And honey, no need to apologize for making us wait. I understand your situation, and I hope you're doing better now <3

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breathe_it_in94 August 6 2010, 20:28:03 UTC
Eek yay I'm glad you like it! I started off trying not to show like, favoritism towards any one of the kids, but it's kind of impossible when you love little kids in rl as much as I do, lol.

Aw thank you sweetie, I am doing much better now actually ^^ thanks <3

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afterhours615 August 6 2010, 12:27:20 UTC
Oh My($%^&&^%GTYCFGH$^&*()&T^DGYEHBHSNWKJDW GOD!!

Iam SOOO happy you updated finally! :DDD
THIS story is SOOOO GOOOD, i want it to be a movie, like now!!
i really want to know what selena's story is. and demi is a hard ass but still sweet, pure win :D
cant wait for the next uppdate :)))))

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breathe_it_in94 August 6 2010, 20:30:32 UTC
Haha thank you! I'm sorry to have kept you waiting, lol. And I'm really glad you're enjoying it ^^ With Demi, I just wanted to make sure that she does have her weaknesses, like we all do in reality. Again, glad you like it, and thanks for commenting!

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perhapsds August 6 2010, 14:29:44 UTC
OMG! This is sooo good!
Please,continue.
Seriously,I love this story.

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breathe_it_in94 August 6 2010, 20:37:17 UTC
Aw thank you! Glad you're enjoying it! <3

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classic06 August 6 2010, 18:10:17 UTC
So I just read this and the first two chapters, and I love it. It's so good. I can't wait to find out what exactly happened Then, and how Demi's going to get the kids back.

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breathe_it_in94 August 6 2010, 20:34:29 UTC
Had to stop myself from fangirling for a moment but I'm good now

I'm really glad you like this, thank you! It means a lot coming from you, it does. Thanks for commenting!

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classic06 September 10 2010, 23:22:20 UTC
so...i think you should update this, and yes, as i say this, i realize how much of a hypocrite i am because i know i sure as hell need to update too, lol

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chachacheese August 6 2010, 19:26:35 UTC
how have i just found this?! this is excellent. Just got done reading both parts and i'm so PSYCHED to see where it's going.

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breathe_it_in94 August 6 2010, 20:35:54 UTC
I don't know, but I'm glad you did find it, if it gets me reviews like this *blush*. Glad to know you're enjoying it, thanks!

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