Comments | breathe_misery: Strawberry Fields (Vam) (1/3)

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Strawberry Fields (Vam) (1/3)

Dec 06, 2009 20:55

Title: Strawberry Fields
Author: breathe_misery.
Pairing: Vam
Rating: PG-13 - R
Summary: Nothing else was ever a weakness.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything but this story.
Author's Note: This came about because Glycerine by Bush is one of my all time favorite songs, and I felt it could be used in a Vammy sense. And I just wanted to write some more, haha ( Read more... )

fan fiction, vam, ville valo, bam margera, strawberry fields

Comments 11

lillithvalo December 7 2009, 02:19:07 UTC

MINE!

poisonxangel December 7 2009, 03:12:17 UTC

ow. that kinda hurt alot.

ex_mikkosgr December 7 2009, 05:10:51 UTC

aww poor guys :(

cyanidesun78 December 7 2009, 07:08:55 UTC

This story has hooked me in straight away, I love it.

alicez17 December 7 2009, 08:36:16 UTC

Ouch.

This actually really pulled my heartstrings. Even so, it does hold a touch of reality to it, IF they were together. I can actually see Bam responding this way in real-life.

There were definitely a few lines portraying their need and other feelings that I loved such as,

"We drowned ourselves blissfully in alcohol and cigarettes, finding each other in the haze of it all, and it was the closest to heaven I thought I'd ever find."

I don't think I'll mention them all, because I think my comment would be way to long:)

Just really well done!