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First Times. Old Fears.

Sep 09, 2009 03:50

Title:First Times. Old Fears.
Author: breathedeep222
Rating:Nc-17
Pairing:Rydon.
POV:Third Person.
Summary:Brendon wants to have sex, but something is holding him back. Something deeper than first time nerves.
Disclaimer:I wish I owned. I don't.
Author Notes:First sex scene.
Warnings:Sex. Fluff. Angst. Not in that order.
Beta:My friend Lindsay. She doesn't ( Read more... )

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inthenameofjuc September 10 2009, 03:35:36 UTC

Oh wow, I love your Brendon in this. It was pretty damn good for a first sex scene!

breathedeep222 September 10 2009, 20:19:18 UTC

Thanks! :)
All these comments make me stupidly happy.

dieinthewinter May 9 2010, 17:10:36 UTC

This seriously melted my heart.
I like how fragile and lovely their relationship came out and how strong the connection was between them.

It's totally lovely, thank you for sharing something like that :)

breathedeep222 May 9 2010, 19:47:27 UTC

Oh wow, thank you so much. This comment made me ridiculously happy, I'm glad so you enjoyed it.

dieinthewinter May 9 2010, 19:48:46 UTC

You're very welcome :)
That's the least I can do as a thank you for giving feedback to a fandom you don't even know :D

breathedeep222 May 11 2010, 00:23:14 UTC

Hey, sooooooooo...this is sort of awkward for me, but I'm going to ask you a favor.

I sort of fail at continuing chaptered fics in any sort of timely fashion, so I don't post them. But, the thing is I do want feedback on chapters when I do write them, but I can't get any 'cause I don't post them. I've had this idea for a few days and today I wrote out what I guess could be considered a first chapter or whatever, and I was wondering if maybe you wouldn't mind giving me an opinion on it? It's a Brendon/Spencer panic fic, but it's AU. If you don't want to it's totally cool, I just thought I'd ask.

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