Re: FILL (Ben Sherman/John Cooper, Southland)write_lightJune 26 2011, 05:02:52 UTC
I love you for this - it's beautifully written, it's completely in character for the show, and I have a lump in my throat now. Even your icon fits. <3 Thank you.
Re: FILL (Ben Sherman/John Cooper, Southland)keerawaJune 26 2011, 06:13:40 UTC
Yes! You're absolutely right about how negative an impression of marriage Ben would have from his own life and from what he's seen as a beat cop.
And then Ben think it's now or never, really. Because tomorrow John is gonna be back at the station, asking for his old job back. And then the streets will own him again. That won't make Ben love him any less, but this, this right here, might be his only opportunity to ask. That's just ... stunningly true to character.
Re: FILL (Ben Sherman/John Cooper, Southland)ionchannelJune 27 2011, 00:59:47 UTC
This is absolutely lovely. It's really hard to make a marriage proposal seem natural with these two, but you pulled it off; the voices ring true to their characters. Kudos!
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And then Ben think it's now or never, really. Because tomorrow John is gonna be back at the station, asking for his old job back. And then the streets will own him again. That won't make Ben love him any less, but this, this right here, might be his only opportunity to ask.
That's just ... stunningly true to character.
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