[Flash Fiction] Your Tears Are My Downfall

[bree_nd]

Title: Your Tears Are My Downfall [Flash Fiction]
Pairing: Onew / Key
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Fluff, Smut (A first try for both!)
Summary: His first sinful time.
Disclaimer: I only own the plot. Thanks to graceful_mind and fabricatedays for helping me with this. :)
A/N: I hope you readers enjoy it. Comments and criticism welcome. This story contains a warning as

Comments

[shan_ah_non]

FUCK. THIS IS AWESOME.
REALLY.
I JUST.
THIS JUST.

/INCOHERENT BABBLES

[bree_nd]

Omg! You have no idea how happy you've made me! :)
I'm glad you think it's awesome! *bows*

Thank you so much for reading my first smut!

[mankadi]

OH GOSH SO FUCKING HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THE BOTTOM IS KEY RIGHT?
CUZ THATS HOW I SEE IT :D
HOOOT!! SEXY!!!!!
ME IS DYING >//<
ily <33

[bree_nd]

Mor! I missed chatting with you!

It's up to your perception but yes, I wrote it with Key as the bottom in mind.

I'm glad you like it, bb~ I love you too! &hearts

[mankadi]

OH GOD SAME HERE =3=
i sould totoally get your twitter account or msn or idk ><
hahah yes key as bottom ><
its been a while since i wrote ><
<33

[bree_nd]

Okay, I'm hoping the screen comments thing work. I still have no fucking idea how to use it right. And I don't like sharing my email with just anyone.

[rinni1905]

Aw, it's been quite a long time since I read a very good smut like this. Your smut is really great, I mean it. You weren't very descriptive when writing this, but I can really feel all the scene in this fic and the sensation of the bottom one, which is Kim Key, also, I can feel a really unique kind of love when I read the last line. I think I love the last line the best, "Your tear is my downfall". I think that sentence contains much meaning in the whole fic, and when I read that, my spine is like having an electric run through it. It sounds loving and kind of twisted, in a good way. :)

I know I don't really make sense in my comment, but I hope you can understand. I really love this smut. And sorry for not being able to guess what is this prequel or sequel of another fic. I hope you will reveal the answer soon.

Thanks for writing this fic, I hope I can read more from you. Keke.

[bree_nd]

Oh gosh! You've made me so happy to know that you think it's good smut! *grins* I tried my best with the scenes and sensation and I'm glad that you caught it. I was wondering if anyone might.

It just came to mind cause I've mentioned it in the first part about the tears. I suppose someone twisted like me would end up with twisted fics. Lol. XD

I understood and thank you so much for such a wonderful comment. :) I will soon, after my spotted readers have read this, just in case they'd wanna guess. :) Thanks. I hope to write more for you to read. You did mean more smut, right? :)

[jjongjjang]

loved it. thankyou.

[bree_nd]

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you loved it! :)

[bree_nd]

I hope it lives up to your expectations. XD

[bree_nd]

Oh my God! Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you like it! Was nervous cause you write good smut. And I did write it exactly as your perception of who's who. :) For a nice guy, Onew really can be pictured as a sadist. HOW IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE?! Lol. XD

I'd have to thank my beta-reader for that. She gives the best ideas! :) I'm glad it deflected the sadistic part a little.

Thank you so much for reading and liking it! :) *dances around in joy* I will, hopefully. *blushes* I &hearts you, Dina! :)